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July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story. It was funny, and well written. I like how you point out the fact that vagina and penis can still be sexy by themselves without using pussy and cock. And I agree, Pokemon shouldn't be referred to as gods. And Xain, responding to your reviw, although it's true they do worship them in the Japanese versions, but um hello? Are you Japanese? Do you live in Japan? Do the authors? Do the readers? No. I don't think they do live in Japan. If they do, well, then okay. But majority of people who come on here don't live in Japan. It's like an American drawing a comic and calling it manga because it has Japanese references, but it's not like it's going to be released in Japan. So, no, it's not a manga, it's a comic book. Okay? Good.
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I lover your authors note :) I salute you
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now for a proper review. The story was someone simplistic and short with a few spelling errors. Some sentences were not brought into place properly. One being the part where 90% of one of the lines was nothing but curse words.
Secondly, People have different mothoids of writing, just because you say they should use pussy, doesn't mean they're going to do so. They can write how they want to write, and go ahead. Delete this, it'll just show you're afraid of the truth.
As from the stories i've read very few of them use foul language. The one that has the most use of the word fuck is probly my story...As for the legendaries "were" were can still be used as still. As in some stories in the MANGA say jirachi or Rayquaza as gods. Try reading up on the japanese version before spoting complete fucking bullshit.
‘ancient people worshiped so-and-so as a deity’, not ‘current people worship so-and-so as a deity’
It's the persons personal preference making a mistake by saying people don't have enough confedence in thier spelling is going to piss people off. Not to mention the fact that I would suggest you go read the manga and watch the japanese dub of Pocket Monsters.
In closing, I give this story a 2/10, for effort. But at the same time that 2/10 is for purposly trying to piss people off.
Secondly, People have different mothoids of writing, just because you say they should use pussy, doesn't mean they're going to do so. They can write how they want to write, and go ahead. Delete this, it'll just show you're afraid of the truth.
As from the stories i've read very few of them use foul language. The one that has the most use of the word fuck is probly my story...As for the legendaries "were" were can still be used as still. As in some stories in the MANGA say jirachi or Rayquaza as gods. Try reading up on the japanese version before spoting complete fucking bullshit.
‘ancient people worshiped so-and-so as a deity’, not ‘current people worship so-and-so as a deity’
It's the persons personal preference making a mistake by saying people don't have enough confedence in thier spelling is going to piss people off. Not to mention the fact that I would suggest you go read the manga and watch the japanese dub of Pocket Monsters.
In closing, I give this story a 2/10, for effort. But at the same time that 2/10 is for purposly trying to piss people off.
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol @ telling people to stop saying pussy and cock