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wow I am so in love with this story.

I'm in love with this story! It's amazing, wonderfully written. Keep up the good work and hurry up with the next chapter, I can hardly wait. :)

gah!! too awesome!! OH NOES!! Daddy knows! lol can't wait to find out what happens next!

I'm so glad to see this update !! I love their relationship even if I can't help being worried of what might happen.

Oh, you tease. You evil, evil tease. How can you leave me like that? I wanna see how Kira will react to being L's baby's daddy. At least we got some hot sex out of it but that was still so mean.

Yuhu my first review at AFF, hopefully i'm not being to bad.

I just read your story about l and light and i have got to say i am thrilled. you are going along the stories an it still does not seem to interfere at all with the original. and i just love male pregnancy fics, who would have thought that shinigamies can wake dormant body functions. :)
and light the agressor seducing l right after their first real time, da--. i just hope his love for our beloved detective is stronger than his kira personality. i will be here to read your updates.

Miaria

This is very interesting and one of the best mpreg I've read for DN. It is definitely the best mpreg that follows the story line of the anime/manga. I'd really enjoy it if you updated. :]
Thank you!

Poor L. He wants to love Light but he can't get too close because he's a suspect and now Light is "dating" Misa. On top of that he's the only pregnant man in all of history and who knows if he'll survive the pregnancy. Never mind his "father in law."
Ok, I got the dumb rambling review out of the way. Now to get down to business. This is a great story. This is a plot I've always wondered about. What would happen if the good Light fell in love with L? Would he still kill him once he became Kira again? And the fact that L is pregnant makes it even better.
The story may be somewhat predictable but it's in a comfortable way and your talent more than makes up for the predictability. The dialog flows smoothly and I have no problem following what's happening. You've kept the events pretty close to Cannon, just added some more interesting parts. Everyone is in character considering the crazy situation which really adds to the believability of the story. I am thoroughly impressed with your skill.
I am really looking forward to the next part. What will happen when Light regains his memory? And how will Ryuk react to a pregant L? I so want to see that.

This chapter was great! And it made me really happy that it isn't totally over for them :D You are being so accurate so please don't kill L in the end cuz I would cry then... You are great!

Oh please update soon!
I want L and light back together very badly.... !!