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This chapter was so great!
You made everything so plausible and believable, I haven't read a lot of m-pregs where it was this believable.

I'll be waiting with baited breath for your next chapter!

I have to admit when I started reading this story, and I saw the shinigami sprinkle them, and the whole Mpreg thing, I groaned. The writing was well done, & I liked the smut, so I crossed my fingers, said a silent prayer and kept going. I am pleasantly surprised that not only am I not groaning inwardly, I am waiting rather impatiently for you to update. Please get these two back together!
Well done!

...I want them to be together again... Now I think Light is the stupid one :) Great chapter. Update soon :)

Excellent story so far. I love the way you write. I couldn't stop reading it!!! Please Update soon!!!

L is so mean... I almost cried when he said that to Raito, it was really cruel... Anyway good chapter. You made me emotionall again, hehe. You are being so accurate when it comes to the timeline too, I'm so impressed :) I hadn't been able to do it myself :) Please update soon

Haha oh my...
The plot thickens!
I'm always curious on how Soichiro will react to this sort of thing...
Him more so than the rest of the task force.

The only thing I didn't agree with was how Light called L a freak...
I don't know if it was because at one moment he seemed disgusted and then
at the next he seemed ready to accept the fact that he'd be a father with such a quick
change or if the fact that he called him a freak wasn't even aknowledged, either by Light himself, Watari, or L...
Oh well.
That's just something that stuck out for me, do with that information what you will.
Either way, this story is very good!
I enjoy it thoroughly.
:D

Woah! Oh my god! I don't know what to say. You are a really good writer. I really paniced when it came to the confession because I could feel the felings you described myself... This is actually the first mpreg fic I've read, it have been to wierd for me before but I think this is really great. Please update soon ;)

This is so good!
Please update, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
<3

Aww cute :) I think this story is intresting. Please continiue :)

Aww poor L... I promise you, this make me feel like I never wanna get pregnant ever... It sounds painfull, and I'll just get a kitten instead of a baby :)