rate_review Reviews

Hmmmmmm, can't say I can get into this. Some of the chars seem VERY ooc at times (Zoro playing chess? WTF!) and nothing seems to be happening yet apart from long periods of text. Also it makes me wonder if you are caught up with the manga at all (Doublefinger etcs inclusion says yes but apart from that I can't see anything that points to that you are.) or if you just follow the dub. In which case I'd REALLY suggest that you either catch up on the manga or the anime.

Can't comment on the whole OC thing since I personally find OCs tedious and boring so I just skip over whenever you write them.

I'd also recommend some more description in this.