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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is quite interesting. My favorite character so far is Misa's shinigami. Because of her a lot of things have already changed. Now Misa has no reason to be a fanatic Kira follower, but I guess one way or another, she and Light will meet. I also wonder who the 'Kira' in chapter four was... hmm, I hope that it's Hideki the movie star. Lol, that would be very awesome and I guess, kind of funny.
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my goodness. Ray Penber is a pervert *I knew it!*... just kidding, though it was very funny.
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Mikami! How I missed that character.
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Mikami! How I missed that character.
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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hehe so Light really did have a heart attack. Glad he didn't die although if he did that would mean no L/Light yaoiness...that would be cruel ;p heh
thanks for the update I like this chapter, the way that Misa used the converstation with her mom was actually reall smart...that scares me, a smart misa*shivers*
yea I hope we get more Light scenes and hopefully L comes soon! I wonder who the new Kira is? hmmm...XD
thanks for the update I like this chapter, the way that Misa used the converstation with her mom was actually reall smart...that scares me, a smart misa*shivers*
yea I hope we get more Light scenes and hopefully L comes soon! I wonder who the new Kira is? hmmm...XD
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooohhhh new story! I really like how it starts out! XD sorry that you have writer's block on your other story. I like your Nu she's very interesting in this, I liked how Ryuk was chained to a wall in punishment...hehe he would have died of bordom before to long XD soo...redemption huh? My fav 8D
I can't wait for chapter 2, please update soon! XD
I can't wait for chapter 2, please update soon! XD
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oops I just realized that you have more then one chapter up! yea! hehe I like your OC shinigami...even if she does eat human flesh...creepy.
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH Raito's having a heart attack! Oh no! ;.; don't die yet Raito! I liked how Raito throw down the deathnote instead of keeping it, yea you did the right thing Raito! hmmm I wonder when L's going to come onto the scene? I actually feel a tiny bit sorry for Misa, but I don't blame her parents for thinking that she's nuts. I can't wait for the next chapter! this is getting really good! XD
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've only read the first chapter so far but this is looking to be an intriguing story. My only gripe is how you spell Ryuk/Ryuuku as Ryku. I'll be checking out the second chapter when I've got the time, and any updates you post following that in the same manner.