rate_review Reviews

Hey there! I'm glad to see you wrote some more to this story. It was awesome! The way Tachi and Daisuke acted around each other was so cute I couldn't help but squeal. Then when Tai pulled that prank I felt awful for Matt, until Matt pulled him by his hair and hit him. That was just uncalled for! Bad Matt! I love to see how this ends (well I already know how it ends but you know what I mean). It be cool if did an epilogue on what happened after the first chapter too (Of course that's entirely up to you if you want to finish it). I really enjoy reading this. Can't wait for the smex! Happy writing!!! ^_^
Ps. Oh if you want a beta, I don't mind helping out.

I just wanted to let you know, I really love your story. It has so much depth that is missing from so many fanfiction. I love how well the characters are written too. I feel bad for Matt but, at the same time I can't help but feel he deserves what was coming to him. And Daisuke is just so cute, I can really relate to Tachi's dilemma without ever being in such a situation myself. Anyways I really loved it and I hope (if you feel like it only) that you can write a bit more for it too. ^_^