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August 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey. I really enjoyed this story!!! Loved the concept. I saw your author's note. If you are still looking for a beta I would be willig to offer my services.
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May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
so cute. you really kept true to their characters, and kind of added without really distracting from the original story.
I always know when a story is good, when I end up feeling it too... the emotions, that is.
Should probably get a beta... spelling/grammar mistakes kind of took away from your wonderful story.
It shouldn't, I really enjoyed the detail you put into it.
I always know when a story is good, when I end up feeling it too... the emotions, that is.
Should probably get a beta... spelling/grammar mistakes kind of took away from your wonderful story.
It shouldn't, I really enjoyed the detail you put into it.