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this story is crazy good and this chapter took the kinky awesome to another level. this maybe the best smut story i have ever read keep up the epic work thanks for the read

Nice harem story the pacing was good and its cool that it makes you wonder what is next. I was wondering where is Naru?

It goes withour saying that the characters are a little OOC, but this is a love hina story on Adult fanfiction: so it's expected, and it wasn't the intent of the story. As far as smut goes, it's really good. You should add in a little conflict to spice things up. You should get to the test in a near future chapter, and do other things in between. I liked the rivalry between Cassandra and Amalla. Cassandra did seem more interested in Keitaro then the other whorls did. Maybe you could have her meet up with Keitaro again. The interaction between him and Amalla would be very interesting. Regardless on where you take the story though, I'll always be looking forward to the next chapter.

I'm a big fan of your Love Hina stories. I was wondering if I could use your lemon for my Naruto and Sekirei crossover story.

Nice so what is going on with Naru, is Mei Narusagawa training Naru to be a good girl?

FUCK. YES. Finally a scene with Sarah, and an awesome one! There isn't enough good material featuring her in smutfiction. Please don't let it stop here!

I forgot about Sarah and Nyamo. How about Shinobu becomes Nyamo Mistress to keep her away from Tsuruko. Or better let Shinobu punishes Tsuruko for hurting her sister. It is a thought but please update with Chapter 37 has soon as you can. But I would like to see some more Shinobu and Nyamo action please.

Please update soon. Chapter 36 was good so please update soon.

Epic story this has to be my fav love hina story on this site. Cant wait to see what happens between mutsumi and him and was super excited to see mitsune finally get in the mix! great pull also with Nyamo i forgot all about her. i think the only other major girl left is naru and we have yet to get any info on her since she had the perfume. love the story keep up the awesome work and thanks for blessing us with it!

what i really mean is number 1 love hina story period this site or any other!!!

Wow, you are incredible, I'm shocked you are able to just continuously write such awesome smut (I mean like, 15000 words of just smut in a chapter), the most I could get myself to do was like 2200 words of smut in a chapter (I might be generous in my estimates too). Honestly though, damn, keep doing you, great stuff. Also, MolMol should be snoo snoo. :p