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Glad to see you again, I have been reading the fic and waiting for your updates. I really hope you can update a little bit faster (I know RL sucks big time, but I can dream).

Also I hope you could work more plot development in your future updates, while sexy time is always welcome, I enjoy the main story as well.

Keep the good work

Sorry it took me so long to review I went back reading the other chapter's to catch up on what is going on. Yuna is the dom one of the slave's but Kotomi should take over and Domiant Yuna for a turn to get her back for making her cum in front of Keitaro. It is only an idea. I would love to see Tsuruko get what is coming to her from Keitaro. Reading him doing her while Motoko watch's would make it very good. Then Motoko get's a turn but only after she beg's for it. It is only an idea. If I come up with anymore idea's I will send them to you. But I can't wait to see when you post the next chapter. Please go back to the other girl's for a bit and give us a little back ground on what they are doing. I jsut got another idea. Su and Shinobu should help each other deal with Keitaro and his HUGE dick. If I get anymore I will PM them to you.

How about Keitaro tease's Motoko for all the time's she sent him flying and all of that stuff. I can't wait to see what happen's next but that Idea I put down first is just an idea. If you can use it then go ahead. I will PM you if I come up with any other idea's. But I have a few coming to me right now. Keep up the good work.

Again a cool chapter from you. let you all the time it took to write as good as possible. btw what have you changed in hentai sou?

Man I love your story I can't wait for Shinobu & Motoko to get in on this if there is one thing you could do to make this story better it to make a glossary of the girls and what Anime there from.

Loving this story so far and reaally like that it is written properly. Really can't wait to see how it turns out when Kei starts going after the Hinata girls and Tsuruko. I have to admit the way that Yuna acted towards Naru did seem sadistic to me but after hearing her reasons for why she was doing all that to her it made a lot more sense. I don't know if you are still taking opinions on Shinobu's outfit but if you are my vote would be for the naked apron simply because despite her being shy and naked around Kei the apron could be a comforting factor since she wears one almost all the time whenever she is at the Hinata house. Anyway, again, great story and hope to read more when you have the time to upload (^_^)

Again a very good Chapter Hope in The Next chapter haruka is very impressed what her nephew is doing.

I would love to see a scene with Motoko, Tsuruko, and Keitaro. Where Keitaro and Motoko get soem action with each other. I can't wait to see what Chapter 13 would look like. Please keep up the good work and I will review it. Please don't stop the story it is very good.

awsome chapter cant wait for the next but you need to have him motoko and shinobu already thanks for a great story hope the next chapter is not to far away

I saw a few spelling mistake's but other then that it is a good chapter. I can't wait to see what will happen next. How about Motoko finally get's punished by Keitaro for beign a bad little girl that she is. Or something alone those line's it is up to you on what you put down. If you need any more idea's PM in the forum section and I will help you from there.