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July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww.
that ending was cute.
i cant wait until you make more.
make more ok?
then you wont have to meet my friend.
lol.
by the way.
i love it!!!!!
~Golden Kitsune~
that ending was cute.
i cant wait until you make more.
make more ok?
then you wont have to meet my friend.
lol.
by the way.
i love it!!!!!
~Golden Kitsune~
schedule
March 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
All in all, it's okay, but I couldn't help but be distracted by the errors (spelling, punctuation, word order/choice). I'd suggest reading over it again or finding someone to proof it. A fresh pair of eyes can work wonders! Hope this helps. :)
nikita
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