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April 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Probably one of the most interesting Ranma fics I've read in years, and the citrus scent is just icing. I really wasn't expecting anything of literary value on AFF.net, but you have me hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter. It does seem like Ranma might be a little underpowered compared to Ryoga though? Maybe Ranma's just under the weather from starving for who knows how long.
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December 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice story so far; I hope you continue it.
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October 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was another great chapter, and it renewed some of my interest byreferring to Ryouga as a "privileged little douchebag." Nice. Good job!
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September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Er. You'd be surprised if anyone still reads Ranma fiction? Really? Not to worry, it's still going strong.
I quite dug this first chapter, all except for one thing. I didn't really want there to *be* a curse in this. It seemed like this was to be a fairly realistic story using the cast as inspiration. I'm usually all for the curse, but the idea of a story about these two girls was quite appealing to me.
Well, it's still quite an engrossing story. Now to read the second chapter!
I quite dug this first chapter, all except for one thing. I didn't really want there to *be* a curse in this. It seemed like this was to be a fairly realistic story using the cast as inspiration. I'm usually all for the curse, but the idea of a story about these two girls was quite appealing to me.
Well, it's still quite an engrossing story. Now to read the second chapter!
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September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I definitely dug this more when I thought it was a girl-type Ranma story. Oh well. Like I said, it's still pretty interesting stuff...and I'll certainly check out any future chapters!
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September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am loving the story and am thrilled that it is being updated. I just hope that female Ranma will playa part in the exploitive industry.
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September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2
Great new chapter. Usually I hate Ranma/Akane stories but this one is nice. I wonder if Ranma will be able to work as a guy. I'm sure Soun will think that his girl form would attract a lot more customers, especially so if Kuno had a Ranma-chan fixation in this story.
Great new chapter. Usually I hate Ranma/Akane stories but this one is nice. I wonder if Ranma will be able to work as a guy. I'm sure Soun will think that his girl form would attract a lot more customers, especially so if Kuno had a Ranma-chan fixation in this story.
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September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
happy day. Still writing? Please keep writing.
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September 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. Not sure (yet) why its here, and not on some other, less adult, website, though I assume thats because of future content.
I like Akane in this, especially how she tried to buy girl clothes for ranma. Funny, and it shows a fair bit about how they both think.
Looking foward to more, and to seeing what happened to Genma.
I like Akane in this, especially how she tried to buy girl clothes for ranma. Funny, and it shows a fair bit about how they both think.
Looking foward to more, and to seeing what happened to Genma.
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July 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please continue.