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for Hit This City

by cnakitny

schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a real good start, love the way you are doing the Ranma cast, looking forward to more chapters.
person wispy
schedule December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You have my attention! I'm always up for a good Akane-fic. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.
person Anon
schedule December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Its good, please continue.
person Sethite
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was pretty nice story. He he he. Well done.
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing re-tell of the characters. Looking forward to more.
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great start so far. I really like it and I hope that Ranma won't work as a prostitute in this one. There are already enough of those.

I noticed that you got some personal pronouns wrong in the last part.
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm pretty interested in seeing how this turns out. Sounds great so far.

klv
person Xochen
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have loved this story so far! People definitely do still read Ranma 1/2 fan fiction, however the authors are beginning to dry up a bit. I can't wait to read more of your story should you wish to continue it, the chapter length was great. I look forward to seeing how Ranma-chan interacts with all of the others are Soun's place. Happily, Akane will be able to get rid of those idiot workers she has to deal with.

Thank you for sharing this story with us all,
~Xochen
person hsaotome
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, there are still those of us who read Ranma fan-fiction. Although this one is a bit different. Soun, Akane, Kasumi and Nabiki all unrelated? Seems a little weird. It'll be interesting to see Ranma having to get dressed up, including makeup, to work in the place. And I can't help wondering how the curse will make itself known, and what Soun might plan once he finds out about it.
person spch
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM

Good story so far, looking forward to more.

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