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May 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Excellent spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Solid plot. Always room fo improvement, such as further character- and relationship-development. However, as it stands, it is by no means bad and is satisfying in its brevity.
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April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story!! Please continue it!! I really want Lavi to find out about Kanda's tattoo and Kanda about Lavi's eye!
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April 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm tired so forgive me for the pathetically short review. Basically this story has everything I look for in a KandaLavi fic and I'm glad to see the pairing since it's fairly rare and dgm fics are getting rare in general. In any case, it was very well written, and I'm itching to read more.
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