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December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interest and enjoyable however elements can be pipped up by adding something else to spice it and separate it from others. Good chapter.
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December 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"they ear prize money" you mite want to fix that dude also please ADD A SEX SCENE OR SOMETHING lots of fics start like yours die because people lose interest