rate_review Reviews

Very well done from beginning to end although I'm surprised that the mentions of Dawn, Iris or May didn't come in given they're also well known trainers. I as well have a foot fetish and it was truly great to see another author have one as well. Hopefully more to come

at last. the journey is finally nearing its conclusion. I'm so happy...

Double Five: one for Hot Chapter Five, and one for Nice To See This Back Five!

The pace you set yourself to for updating this story was stunning, and I can definitely understand and sympathize with the burnout. Well done for getting this far, take a well deserved rest. Definitely some real winners among the many chapters, and the recent one with Dransa was a good cap off. For a while, I was convinced that there were only two ways for this story to end: either somebody hits a reset button, allowing Cynthia to return to her duties without being so sexually charged as she's become, or it goes the complete opposite direction and she ascended to a literal sapphic love goddess. I can kinda see the third option you're setting up for. When you're ready, I'd be interested in seeing it. Until then, cheers.

Love, the director,
Yoshimo Sullivan

Double Five--one for Tit Cumming Lesbian Incest Five, and one for As Long As You Keep The Lady Love Coming One Way Or Another You Can Hiatus As Many Stories As You Want Five!

I can't believe it. All that waiting was for nothing...

Well, it's sad to see one of my favorite stories is reaching it's conclusion. Only one (or two, I don't know what you'll do with Iris) Champion left. Take all the time that you need, and I'm looking forward to this story's conclusion and the other stories you'll come up with in the meantime.
Peace out.

so wait r u saying that drasna is cynthai's mom, did u make that up or did i completely miss that??

You Made Face Fives Strangely Sexy Five!

For a journey to be fantastic it requires fantastic storytelling and structure, things that this story have in spades, the pacing is really well-done, the characters are good handled and the variation of content between chapter is amazing without straying from the path. My only complaint that you shouldn't limit yourself with Gym leaders only, how about a chapter with Professor Juniper or Fennel or Bianca?. But your're the author so do what you like although it will make me the happiest guy in Earth if you end this amazing tale with Cynthia having fun with Dawn and then realizing that she's "the one" for her or something along those lines. Anyway, keep up the good work fella.