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I have to say that I usually do not go for tentacle porn, but this latest chapter was so good that I didn't even realize until it was way too late that that's exactly what I was reading. That chick pulled one slick trick on my dick in this fic!

This is very neat and sexy, but a few chapters stand out more than others. I feel like with a lot of your chapters and a lot of your stories that you don't put a lot of time and effort into really describing the personal passions of the people having sex, the thoughts and feelings and desires and pleasures and actions of them...it's often like you're in a hurry to get from Point A to Point B. And it's good, it is, I just feel like it could be better sometimes. This most recent chapter is a good example...I love me some hypnosis/brainwashing sex fics, but a lot of it's sort of glossed over. It happens, Cynthia falls under, we get a couple vague descriptions of her sensations...there could just be a lot more to it, a lot more shown as a mind is slowly broken down and reduced to horny enslavement to another woman, broken on her will. In a better story of this kind, I'm there, feeling every inch of the woman's (or man's) fall, reading and feeling her fighting and losing and desperation and growing submission as she (or he) loses the battle of wills. That's what I'm talking about....a lot of the time, you're just missing the personal touch and detail of the sex, and just going from start to finish at a basic pace, depending on the basic actions to be enough. Dont get me wrong, it's good, it's fun to read, it's sexy.....I just feel like you're capable of more ya?

Maylene's chapter was incredible; I would fucking LOVE to be with a girl that powerful!!

I Like This Story But It's Seriously Bullshit That There Hasn't Been Any Other Good Or Even Half-Good Lesbian Story Uploaded Or Updated On This Site Besides This One In Weeks Five!

Over 30,000 hits.
30 chapters
And it's all nothing but pure lesbian sex with lots of various fetishes. What absolutely amazes me is that this never really gets boring. Nearly each chapter is another new character, a new expierence. This is really noteworthy once you start getting into the double digit chapters. Something like this should have lost it's appeal and charm a LONG time ago, but obviously the writer still takes intense interest in writing this, and still makes every chapter super-appealing. Chapter 29 is my personal favorite, taking two fetishes i'm not a huge fan of(Minors and Candy Cosplay), along with one of my favorites to read about (Breastmilk) and binding them together in SUCH an appealing way.
I applaud you for your work, and I do hope to see more from you as you continue Cynthia's seemingly never-ending adventure.

hmmm would you be doing Deliah anytime soon?

They're all great, but my favorites so far are 1, 5, 8, 12, 13, 14, 21, 23, 24, 28, and 29. I have a lot of favorites but that's your fault

I just read this story from START to FINISH, BACK to FRONT, in ONE SITTING. It was AWESOME. WHY did I do it? Because I am THE MAN. Write MORE.

That Dahlia chapter was intense but really good and hot, and I never thought of Argenta sexually before but you've made me a believer!

I have finished reading chapter 13. I can't wait to see what happen's in the next chapters. So please update if you have anymore idea's for the story.