rate_review Reviews

This last chapter was pretty good I guess, but it felt like filler kind of, just taking up space between Cynthia's more interesting conquests. But its still pretty good!

I also have a question for you, you have so many unfinished stories, do you ever intend to get back to them? I was just thinking the other day about your centaur zelda story and how it's been a while since you updated it, and thinking about all the others of yours Ive read that seem like they're dead now. It's too bad because a lot of them I really loved!

I wonder what'll happen when Cynthia gets to Johto?

Wow, that was.......surprisingly hot! I didn't really ever think of pregnant women as sexy before (me and my wife don't want kids so I dont know first hand); but I think you've just convinced me!

And I have a question, is this story going to be like Motoko's Quest at all? Like will Cynthia eventually find a true love to be with? Because if she does I really would love it if it was the girl from the new Pokemon games Iris. First of all I love your stories with little girls and women together, and I really love Iris! but also it is also an idea, I was think that maybe since Cynthia liked this chapter soooo much and that you've now given me a new fetish maybe you could have Cynthia nad Iris do artificial stuff and have Cynthia get pregnant so she and Iris can start a family! It is kind of weird I know but its so kinky and I love the idea already. I think you need to do this after all it is your responsibility I have this fetish now so you have to own up to it or I won't forgive you!!! :D j/k but if you did have any intention of having Cynthia be with anyone in love then I would like to see Iris

But at any rate keep up the good writing!

Nice chapter, although if I were Cynthia I would have tried to hold out for a little while longer for that city orgy, lol!

Damn! This is getting good! I almost forgot that there are FOUR female Gym Leaders in Kanto now! Can't wait for Johto!

Do I even have to review this? It should be obvious that I find this super sexy and that I hope we'll see more of it! I like how you showed Misty and Erika, especially Misty, the pesronality was really good for her. Can't wait for more! With this and the Stable Relationships story, plus that Sailor Moon Ami one, you've made one hell of a comeback! Or is that cumback, lol!

Amazing! An unbelievably great start to what is bound to be an incredible story. Loved the idea with the bubbles, loved the water bed (don't see those too often in a story) and loved Misty. Super cute and portrayed just as i would expect in such a situation. Keep up the brilliant work and looking forward to more!
Descendant of the Shadows
-Twisteddarkness