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August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story and I'm sad to see it done, but it was very good. Your writing could definitely benefit from some proofreading but it was an enjoyable read none the less. I hope you keep writing!
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August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a brilliant story
However there are a few confusing mistakes in the epilogue like he pressed his check to the crock of her feathery neck wouldn't that be he pressed his cheek to the crook of her feathery neck?
And this story could (and I stress could) be longer it's fine as it is but I believe that it could be better if it was longer
However there are a few confusing mistakes in the epilogue like he pressed his check to the crock of her feathery neck wouldn't that be he pressed his cheek to the crook of her feathery neck?
And this story could (and I stress could) be longer it's fine as it is but I believe that it could be better if it was longer
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August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
THis is perhaps the best ending I've ever seen on a story. I'm just sad it is an ending. This was a wonderful story. -WWMH-
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August 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That last bit was actually pretty touching. I eagerly await more updates, and even more relationship development.
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August 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is really getting good. I almost lost interest when Owen went back to civilization, but this chapter made me come back to the story. You are very talented, and this story is moving at a really good pace. I hope to read more soon.
-WWMH-
-WWMH-
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August 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well i enjoy the story but i am sad that you say only 1 or two chapters left, i understand setting an end point is a good thing, allows for a more concrete story structure, but it just makes me sad knowing the end is near
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July 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story so far. I really like the premise. There are 4-5 stories that I'm always happy to see updated, and yours is one of them.
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June 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh man, I've just been waiting for a while now for the next chapter and it's driving me nuts! please tell me when you plan on posting the next chapter!
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May 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm really glad this story is still being written. I find it an interesting read that sucks me in. I love the intelligence of the Blaziken, and I enjoy reading the slow bonding between Owen and her. His reactions to everything are extremely believable. I really wish I could adequately describe just how much I enjoy this story. I just can't tell you how much I look forward to every future installment. I really do. Please don't stop writing Mountain Storm. It's too fascinating to die.
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May 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Believe it or not i read all the chapters and meant to write a review a while back but have been checking this story to see if the next chapter was up yet i can honestly say that i am anticipating the next chapter spelling grammar aside its a great story and well written if grammar is ignored for now any way but you'll probably get to that sooner or later but until then i'll be w8n.