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April 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love your story! Im glad youre not just jumoing into the sex. After I read this chapter I gotta a funny image of an embarresed Owen seeing a blaziken courtsgip/mating and his blaziken being puzzled about his embarressment lol
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April 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far. You're doing a great job describing the scenes and the characters, and I like how you have them interacting with each other, especially the Combusken and the trouble maker Torchic. Keep it up ^_^
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March 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a bit slow, but I'm interested to see where it's going, keep up the good work.
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March 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
the premise is really cool and i like where this is going but you really need to work on spelling and grammar because its really distracting and those kind of mistakes just take away from what could be a really good story if you put some time and effort into it