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December 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Damn that Abra is a piece of work. I hope that she repairs her relationship with Rob next chapter; hopefully she'll ask about Elise and learn what happened. That, and he honestly gave her the opportunity to leave him; that should mean something to her.
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November 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I'm glad that Rob and Gardevoir's relationship is beginning to get off the ground. Do you think you could give me a ballpark estimate as to when the evil Abra/whatever thing is going to be cleared up (probably not in the near future, but even just a rough estimate would be nice). I hope that their relationship begins to develop further.
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October 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story Twill, as I've come to expect of you. Other than a few typos this story is still grand, and I know all about silly typos when my brain thinks one thing and my hands type another. We overcame the darkness of her past hunting her and had her tell Rob, and now we've moved on to an even better arc - the future. I love this story, as well as WLatC. I don't review every chapter, but I try to comment now and then when I find a particular chapter really good or when the story moves in a neat direction.
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October 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for not reviewing this chapter earlier, I did read it. Hehe.
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October 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very ominous. We didn't figure out what's wrong now, but I hope we will soon. What I want to know is what exactly that demented Abra is. And what could be so terrible about her power? I mean, it is totally unnatural, but... is she like a ticking time bomb or something and that's what the issue is? If you have any thoughts that you can give me without major spoilers, that would be appreciated.
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September 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was.....wow....ahem. Well worth the wait. I look forward to more, and I happen to very much appreciate your writing and the update. ^_^ -WWMH-
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September 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice. But what was that horrible Abra shade? The mental manifestation of her negative energy? I wonder...
Do you think you could enlighten me as much as you can without spoilers? In case my email isn't next to this review, it's magesbe@gmail.com
Do you think you could enlighten me as much as you can without spoilers? In case my email isn't next to this review, it's magesbe@gmail.com
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August 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very intense. Just how is Gardevior going to get away now? They plainly intend to kill her, but for the story to continue she has to remain alive... hmm. When she does get rescued/escape, she'll probably play this off as her old owner's Pokemon going after her. I am actually looking forward to when Gardevior reveals the truth about her killing everyone.
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August 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Rob, Riolu doesn't seem friendly to him......and I'm beginning to like how dark this story is getting. Keep it up. -WWMH-
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July 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far. I'm kind of a sucker for Gardevoir stories in general, but they have to be well written. You write very well, and I love the story you're telling so far. Can't wait for future updates!