rate_review Reviews

Dang, way to leave things at a cliffhanger. And no updates to this story for two weeks? Aw. Well, not bad I suppose. I imagine that things will end up alright once the exact circumstances come to light. While there was an injury, it wasn't too bad, and that was the only thing (other than the theft. And seriously, it's not like she stole money or weapons, the fact that they were ANTIDOTES of all things should mean something).

I have not been quite this interested in a story in some time. Your characters are magnificently designed, their personalities are realistic, and the situations play to the emotions of readers. Please continue writing when you are able, I look forward to seeing more of your work. I look forward to each chapter. -WWMH-

Well, an ominous cliffhanger. I'm pretty sure I know what Kirlia's going to do next, but I still eagerly await the next update. It's kind of nice to know exactly when someone will update, so kudos to you on that as well.

Hmm, I wonder exactly what the mistake will be...

I hope that Kirlia doesn't damage Falkner's pokemon too much. Either way though, at least she'll learn that in the outside world, people don't usually gamble their pokemon.

I really like this story. It is so much better than all of those PWP (Porn Without Plot) stories on this site. Poor Kirlia is suffering from some major trauma. Facing this Abra... well, the only thing worse would be facing an Absol. She will lose the upcoming battle, but there is a chance this will get her to open up to her new trainer.