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September 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow... This is very gory. It has the elements of Joker mixed in with Jack the Ripper...ouch. I hope he is caught...too bad no Pokemon CSI exists.
The site doesn't let me leave a signed review, strangely.
The site doesn't let me leave a signed review, strangely.
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January 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great descriptions, especially in the first chapter. Espeon hit Zorua with a psychic attack, I don't know if his hybrid nature doesn't grant him psychic immunity, but that threw me off a little. And aside from a few awkward sentences here and there, nice job. I'm almost as hesitant to read more as I am waiting in anticipation to see how this catastrophe goes down =P
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January 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You're well on your way depicting Nameless' origins and your writing style has definitely improved a lot!
Keep at it! Im looking forward to the upcoming chapters and seeing how you craft my characters in your own way :)
Keep at it! Im looking forward to the upcoming chapters and seeing how you craft my characters in your own way :)