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August 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a great sexy, romantic, angsty story. The language is a bit clumsy, but it does not get in the way of the hotness! I particularly loved the lemon in ch 4. I also love how you built the tension up gradually. Please do update - it is very sexy and I really am enjoying it a lot!
One correction I would suggest is you are using 'thug' when I think you mean 'thud' (the sound the drapes make when they open).
One correction I would suggest is you are using 'thug' when I think you mean 'thud' (the sound the drapes make when they open).
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February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay! More please!
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February 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
If there are mistakes in this story they only add to the tales sexy charm! LOL G