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May 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I found `Enlightenment`very moving. A very subtle use of the situation the monk and healer found themselves in, the fight they were in with their companions. Hakkai finding that he was in love with Sanco was a sort of by-product of the confrontation. The dialogue got a bit confusing but sorted itself out rather nicely. There was one spot that I saw that needed a bit of correcting. Paragraph 109- lift/life. Aside from that, very interesting, and quite good.