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July 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was fantastical written and such a great read! I quite enjoyed these last two chapters, and love how Lina not only came out stronger in the end, but helped so many people as well. Once again, I love how despite the seriousness and subject matter, this scenario still feels so very Slayers, if you understand what I mean.
I'm glad I could offer some support. I enjoyed this story so very much.
I'm glad I could offer some support. I enjoyed this story so very much.
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June 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Man. It's bad enough that had to recount that night and tell it to a perfect stranger who kept remarking about how it makes her look. The humiliating details he kept trying to pry out of Lina and the reminder of that axe just makes it all the worse. Very nicely done there! I mean, it's a terrible thing Lina has to go through, but it's great in how well written it is.
Another great chapter!
Another great chapter!
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June 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Good for you, Lina! You go and set the record straight! :D
What more can I say? This chapter was excellent. I can't wait for more!
What more can I say? This chapter was excellent. I can't wait for more!
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June 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
People don't review enough on this site, and a story this good deserves reviews, I say. :)
But anyway, I really like the flow of this chapter. It feels so much like an actual episode of the anime--if darker and more serious than it tends to be.
But of course. Once an event that only only help Lina with her recent depression but helps her and Gourry in their relationship, that whole wanted things comes up. This could get ugly with that last statement from her.
Fantastic chapter once again!
But anyway, I really like the flow of this chapter. It feels so much like an actual episode of the anime--if darker and more serious than it tends to be.
But of course. Once an event that only only help Lina with her recent depression but helps her and Gourry in their relationship, that whole wanted things comes up. This could get ugly with that last statement from her.
Fantastic chapter once again!
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June 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, that's quite the upset. Poor Lina.
This is still quite an excellent chapter!
This is still quite an excellent chapter!
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June 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is really well written! It's much more serious than the anime tends to be, but it's believable and so very good. I can't wait for more!