rate_review Reviews

awesome story!

I really liked it update soon

I must tell you, since you were nice enough to review one of mine, that I avoided this fic before now because it was AU - just a personal preference I have, I guess. That said, this was awesome. Your arrogant, sardonic characterization of Sebastian was particularly believable and fun to read. Sex scenes were all quite hot, even the initial rape scene. Parts of the plot reminded me of Okane Ga Nai (worth a read if you haven't already checked it out). I particularly enjoyed Chapter 2 and the scene with Shinobu. It was so sweet, and almost... sisterly? Weird way to put it, I know.

I think the only ConCrit I can really give for this is that the flashback of how Sebby 'obtained' Ciel during the sex scene seemed a bit out of place. I don't know where else I would have put it, though. Possibly interspersed a bit more throughout Chapter 3, or just more toward the middle.

I would love love love for you to write more stuff, if you are so inclined. Your writing style is top-rate, your pacing is perfect, your typos are nearly non-existent, and your characterization is vivid and enjoyable.

I have so far extremely enjoyed this fanfic more then I probably morally should have. In either case, I also enjoyed the original characters. They did not bother me, and I enjoyed what happened in both first and this chapter and shall continue reading soon as this is on my mental favorite fanfic ever.