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December 23, 2021 at 12:00 AM
Really great story. Shinji is great for a sub and dom position in my opinion, but sub is the much easier and hotter of the two. It would have been intresting to see what was done with Asuka, but that never happened.
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October 24, 2020 at 12:00 AM
I give this story a solid 90 out of 100, the writing, the pacing and the story themselves are all excellent, but the missing chapters are what makes this not as perfect as it should be. I sure hope you continue writing this story because it is by far one of the best that I found on this site ! :)
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March 21, 2020 at 12:00 AM
Excelente historia . tengo ganas de ver como continua
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January 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I was beginning to think this update would never come but I'm glad it did. It was really great and I loved it. I can't wait to see more.
I'm just wondering how many times Misato is going to have to remind Shinji that his focus shouldn't be on sex. it should be on pleasing her. he really seems focused on the idea of one day being able to fuck his mistress like a man.
I'm just wondering how many times Misato is going to have to remind Shinji that his focus shouldn't be on sex. it should be on pleasing her. he really seems focused on the idea of one day being able to fuck his mistress like a man.
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January 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Great to see an update and well done. I specifically appreciate the twist on the usual taking the s-type shopping experience. Both getting him nice clothing and it not be all fetish gear.
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August 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I am intrigued, and I like some aspects of it--it seems semi-plausible, compared with canon.
At the same time it's kind of creepy and rapey. Misato seems to me to be getting way too aggressive and way too kinky, way too fast.
At the same time it's kind of creepy and rapey. Misato seems to me to be getting way too aggressive and way too kinky, way too fast.
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December 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I feel like this story can go in a couple of directions but story wise I want misato to take it to far and forget why she's doing this. Maybe she has a bad day and drinks to much and shinji takes the punishment and either runs away again or just loses the will to keep going. Or maybe ritsco sees that shinji is just torturing himself because he thinks she'll abandon him. Maybe shinji has been raped or abused before and thinks this is what he deserves but he should get to experience sex with love as well maybe with rei or asuka
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December 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
love the update! I've been waiting for it all year. if I had to do my customary complaint it would be that collaring is usually a big thing for these stories and its described in detail because it's the main symbol of a slave's servitude.
I'm just glad that this story is updating again.
I'm just glad that this story is updating again.
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August 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
hey are you still working on this story? I set up an account just to send you a PM and check in on how you were doing, but the system doesn't allow for that. You might be able to reply via e-mail to this but if you can't sign up for Darkscribes dot org and find me there. if nothing else you'll find plenty of things to stimulate the creative juices there.
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June 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this update, and I hope to see more soon, but you really didn't have to worry about perspective changes confusing people. It's a third person story not a first person.