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for Moondance

by DrunkenScotsman

person JRC_1700
schedule December 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Once again, an excellent story. Thank you for writing it. I'm really looking forward to reading the next installment.

person Gabe
schedule November 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!!
person Aysha
schedule August 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I finally got a chance to read the last chapter. Moka going solo was a pleasant surprise, and Yukari getting to watch was really cool! unfortunately unless Tsukune actually asked her to do it I don't see it this version of Moka being with another girl. So I think you did good resisting that temptation. Inner Moka however I think that might be a different story. At least I hope so! :D
person Fading Light
schedule July 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was a satisfying conclusion.

I do feel a bit sad for Yukari but I'm sure you have something planned that will be satisfying for all the girls.

Well done.
person Ego Killer
schedule July 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So Moka finally took Inner Moka's advice.

Saw that coming and I was not disappointed.

Can't wait for the next installment.
person Death From Above
schedule July 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was pleased by this chapter.

Although I can't help but feel sad for Yukari. I wonder if there will be at least a satisfying ending to this whole series since this story ended on a somewhat sad note.

Oh well, I hope it all works out. Great job.
person Aysha
schedule July 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was really cool, I was hoping for bit more in depth explanation of the love bite, because it's a very cool idea. Does it make tsukune more or less attractive to other female vampires, or does it mean that other female vampires can't get involved with him? Does it affect tsukune in any other way?

For some reason I think it's really funny when Moka puts Kokoa in her place.
person Ego Killer
schedule July 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This chapter gave a bit more clarity than anticipated.

I have come to really like this interpretation of Inner Moka.

Good job.
person Fading Light
schedule July 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ha!

Kokoa has a dirty side. The conversations between Inner Moka, Kokoa, and Outer Moka were surprisingly well done.

Kudos.
person Death From Above
schedule July 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was not a disappointing chapter.

I hope we see more of Inner Moka in the near future. She deserves to be out more often than they allow in the anime.

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