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ok first let me say, that was accrue place to end chapter 2; I was just starting to get into it and then it stopped!

Anyway so far its really good and I'm really enjoying it. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I saw only two things that need addressing. First at the beginning of chapter 1 you wanted Yukari sneaking out of Tsukune's room and into her own, but you transpose that and had her sneaking out of her room and into his. That kind of thing happens all the time.

the second thing is, when you're tempted to write "had had or that that", try leaving the extra "had or that" out of the sentence and you'll find that they truly are unnecessary, and the sentence reads better without them.

that's supposed to say it was a cruel place to end chapter 2! damn speech writing software always gets the crucial word in a sentence wrong! how does it always know the right word to mess up the whole sentence?

It's so good to see you update and even better knowing that the story is complete.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Just saw this story and I must say I'm impressed. Good job.

Don't let the name fool you.
I actually like this story.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

Wow a sequel! and well written too

I just finished reading The Witching Hour and I must say both of your stories have been phenomenal.

I look forward to the next update.