rate_review Reviews

Yet again, another excellent story. I particularly loved the side thread with Kokoa, it was great! Can't wait to read the next installment.

excellent work my friend, I love what you did with this whole story, but what you added with Kokoa was just superb!

This was done exceedingly well.

Not only did you make Tsukune man up a bit but the love scene, I think, was actually better than the previous ones with Moka and Yukari.

You are truly getting better at your craft and I look forward to the next installment. Nice touch by adding Kokoa by the way.

honestly I think you did a great job. I have no real criticism to offer. other than when their eyes met, you wrote (me)

This one was surprisingly more better than the previous chapter. you are doing well...very well.

Can't wait until the next update.

Alright, now things are getting interesting! Honestly, I've reread the chapter a few times and I can't see much wrong with it. I thought the blowjob scene was pretty well done, especially since you showed evidence of Mizore and Tsukune's inexperience with bits like where Mizore scraped him with teeth and when she almost choked and such. A lot of stories wouldn't do that, at least in my experience.

Sorry, I honestly can't think of much to criticize. Hopefully another one of your readers can help you there.

Anyway, great work! Really hope Tsukune and Mizore do make a baby (though obviously they wouldn't know if they were successfully for awhile lol). That would make things interesting!

Looking forward to more!

That was a great chapter! as always the point in which you chose to end the chapter was as frustrating as ever! ><*

Nice update! I really liked the ice skating date between Tsukune and Mizore. It was a sweet scene.

The kiss scene and character moments were also great as well.

Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Another good chapter. Like the conversation between Mizore and Tsurara, as well as the ending.

Keep up the good work!

Both chapters were great! As always I love the way you put so much into the story including the little details that compliment the characters personalities. Such as Ruby's attendance of the cooking class being somewhat of a long story in and of itself. it is those little details that really enhances the flavor of the curry, I mean story, and I wanted you to know that I really appreciate those details. I look forward to the next chapter!