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December 6, 2020 at 12:00 AM
This story is downright terrible. I'm not talking about morality, though there is that too. No, the problem is that your OC, despite being overpowered, is such a dumb sack of shit that there's no way I can realistically see him win. Walking around without armour in front of a bunch of people who want you dead? Holy fuck he's stupid. Like, ridiculously stupid. Dumber than anyone in DxD. Like, literally anyone in that show could outsmart and kill him. There's no way you're old enough to use this site with that kind of writing.