rate_review Reviews

More, more! That can't be it! >_< ..Grr, great stuff!

i like it when Kenshin gets lippy...

Definitely need to finish this lemon. PLEASE?

this story was such a pallid attempt at writing it was sad. your descriptions were terrible first of all. your analogies and comparisons were ridiculous. the story made no sense. this story is utter garbage.

That was a beautiful story.

hey, why don\'t you continue? come on...

Good, good. But where\'s the full-on sex(like dick, cum, various other things)...?

This is quite nice one-shot lemon. We don't have those often enough. I don't know why... I'd like to understand why authors keep thinking of that lovely couple in our time. I have nothing against A.U, mind you, I write them myself. But seeing too much of one thing kindend end up blazing you (not surprised, not touched, as if it's an everyday thing). Anyway. You have wrote this beautifully. Some part (only the pet names acly) ly) are not to my personnal flavore, but i can't blame you for writing the way you imagine things. It is still a magnificent peace of work. A good lemon that many of Kenshin/Kaoru fans should read. I wish you the best of luck and the most wonderful muses for your future stories. May all the evil white wholes in a writer's mind be gone from yours (god knows that the writer's block is the worse possible tor for for a passionate author, heh).

Cool, sexy and sweet. Love the poetic ,seductive dance between the lovers.

This is a well written piece of work. I loved all of your imagery and descriptions. You managed to catch the true essence of the Rurouni side of Kenshin as well as the Battousai part. I enjoyed your story alot and I hope you get the chance to write another RK fic. It would be of my best interest to see another story written by you with RK in it!