rate_review Reviews

Good idea and pretty well written. Grammar and flow of writing needs improvement. Should probably be longer and have more detail. Parts of the story are choppy and should be more fleshed out. A good rough draft.

*tilts head* Hmmm it\'s a very nice sentiment thau hau had.......having her encounter someone with a similar background as she herself is in. Nice lesson overall for her to get her courage up! But I have to wonder why you posted this here??? Not that I\'m complaining! *grins* It\'s nice. Did you try www.mediaminor.org or www.fanfiction.net? Or even www.thepokemontower.com? They are all very good sites to check out for PM. Good luck with future reviews! *waves*