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OK im reveiwing chapters one through eight! THEY ROCK!!! Tee Hee<3 I loved chapter eight and the funniest line was

\"He probably thought I had been lying when told him that I hadn\'t lacked for lovers. Maybe he even really did expect me to be a virgin. As if I had been saving myself for him. What a ridiculous thought.\"

Oddly that made me laugh. OUT LOUD. Im still laughing right now!! I also kinda laughed when Kazuhiko died!! IM SORRY!!! I had to get that off my chest!!! I luaghed and then I said WTF?!?! not wtf but WHAT THE *FLIP*?!!! (tee hee<3) OK now I feel like Seishirou san. damn. evil man. sexy man. damn. oh well I know you have 15 chapters and all but I have to say it for the sake of DUH.

Update soon. (ha)

Les
~Speaketh the Truth.

OK I have to reveiw again!!! I have to tell you the crap that made me LAUGH OUT LOUD!!!!!! And I\'m still laughing!!!
1) I\'m sorry....but i laughed a LITTLE when Kazuhiko died then when my laughter subsided I kinda luaghed more ^^;;; but then I look back and say WTF?! and....laugh some more ^^;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; so sorry! (feeling sado-masochistic!!!)

2) The funniest lines put together: (He probably thought I had been lying when told him that I hadn\'t lacked for lovers. Maybe he even really did expect me to be a virgin. As if I had been saving myself for him. What a ridiculous thought.) I LAUGHED REALL HARD-LIKE when I read this I was all ((LAUGH!)) because it was (supposedly in the world of fanfiction) TRUE!!! I would think Subaru WOULD save himself for Sei-oh. (tee hee <3) who knows?

3) The secon funniest line by compliments of Kamui Shiirou: \"Do you...like me?\" ((((((LAUGHS!!!!!))))) I was like what the hell is this?! Kamui sounds like some shy schoolgirl!!! AND YET!! IT FITS HIM ENTIRELY!!! ((HHAAHAHHA))

those are the three things that were sad and funny and absoloutely, irrelevantly, hilarous....!

~Les.
Speaketh the Truth.

Sweet mother of PEARL. I KNEW you were taking these chapters from the mangas, but come ON. No one really likes the 16th volume of X anyway!! (seriously? YEAH) and damn the ending was so STUPID and yet I still loved it. THankies for a good Friday morning read.

~Les.
Speaketh the Truth.

Don\'t read many X fics, though I loved the series. I always loved Subaru as well, and the very idea of Sub/Kamui is a bit much for me, but I like how you fit it in here. This bittersweet fic was very realistic-like, with just the right amount of detail (especially regarding the sex). Nice job! I hope you continue writing. I like your style.

(Forgot to mention that review was just for Ch 1!)

This was such a great, thoughtful fic! It seems like a lot of the time when someone writes aboubarubaru it's him as young and over-cute or older and over-angsty. This seemed to be just melancholy enough without going over the top. Plus I love the hints about his feelings for Kamui!
I never thought of that song in this context, either, but it really does fit so well! (I adore that album too.) ^_^

O.O Nice job. Really. ^.^ There's nothing else to say but wow. Happy to see a Subaru/Seishiro one. Since lately all I see are Kamui/ Fuuma. Not that that's a bad pairing or anything. It's just that it's nice to see another one of these. Ah, crap. I'm rambling now. Anyways...hope ya update soon! ^.~

That story\'s wonderful! I just finished chapter 8 and I just loved the ending. Subaru\'s so twisted.

I have no idea why I adore the two, there just so dang cute.