Interruption to a Bath

The sun was just beginning to come up. Keitaro was lying beneath his blanket, eyes closed. For some reason, his body had awakened at this time, and for some reason, it was refusing to go back to sleep. His thoughts naturally went to the events of the previous night. Kanako's words - or rather, the ideas behind her words, as he didn't have perfect memory - ran through his head. And again, for reasons unknown, it was at this point that he felt their impact. Why was it that such obvious things had been invisible to him until they had come out of Kanako's mouth?

It was odd, he thought, that his heart should ache so much from that. But then again, it was sad. Being in love with someone, but knowing that due to the circumstances, there was simply no way for that love to be reciprocated, and then trying so overly hard anyway despite the guaranteed failure. It was pathetic, really. Seeing that in anyone would've made him feel sympathetic. But this wasn't just a stranger, it was his sister. That was what made his feelings of compassion so strong, and that was also the source of the problem and the pain.

Keitaro opened his eyes. In his blurred vision, he could see the ceiling of his room, as well as the covered hole in it that led to Naru's room. That's right, Narusegawa. The events of the past couple days hadn't changed his feelings about her that had existed from the very beginning. Or had they? Anyway, with only a few exceptions, she had always refused his own advances. He had always been chasing her with little hope for reciprocation. Just like Kanako had been chasing him. Maybe that's another reason why he felt so much sympathy towards her.

It seemed too easy. All he had to do was turn around, and she would be there for him, running into his arms. It would have been unthinkable as recent as two days ago, but now...

Yes, it all seemed too easy, and that was why he had to go see her now. Keitaro got up and dressed himself quickly in a tee-shirt and pair of jeans. The unlighted hallways that he walked through were dimly lit by the sun just above the horizon. When he arrived at Kanako's room, he knocked half-heartedly, not expecting her to be up at this time. And following the expected lack of response from within, Keitaro let himself into her room and tiptoed over to where he saw his little sister sleeping on her futon. Only her head popped out from under the blanket, and his eyes were drawn to the locks of her medium-length hair, normally tied in a ponytail, but this time sprawled loose and free over and around her pillow.

Kneeling before her, Keitaro spoke just loud enough to not let his words escape the room.

"Kanako."

Kanako didn't respond. Grabbing her shoulder and shaking it a bit, Keitaro tried again.

"Kanako."

At this, Kanako opened her eyes. Quickly passing through the regular state of disorientation that follows whenever one wakes up, she turned to her brother and smiled, her cheeks reddening a little at the same time.

"Oh... hi, onii-chan... I was just dreaming about you."

Kanako's soft words made Keitaro blush as well.

"But... what are you doing here? What time is it, anyway?"

Kanako pulled her arms out from under the blanket and stretched. One hand came to rest on Keitaro's that was still on top of the blanket from when he had shaken her. Keitaro felt her fingers, hot from being under the blanket with her trapped body heat all night, transfer that heat to his own body through his own fingers as he replied.

"I... I came here because I wanted to talk to you. You know, about... us."

Keitaro struggled to find the right words and stumbled a bit, but his missteps didn't seem to matter, as Kanako completely turned her attention onto him as soon as he finished.

"Well, what is it, onii-chan?"

Keitaro knew that he had seen a nervous look on Kanako's face, but it had passed by in an instant. Her face still as natural and as relaxed as ever, she brought his hand up to it and kissed it before nuzzling against it.

"Well, um, look, Kanako, (dammit, she's not making this any easier), you've always been a precious little sister to me... and... you know, you know I've always loved you."

He thought he could see her flinch at his words.

"And... I... I know how hard it must have been for you... well, maybe I don't know. But I at least know that it wasn't easy for you... that's why I'm saying this..."

Kanako stopped rubbing up against his hand and instead just looked into his eyes. She wanted to scream at him to get to the point, but of course, such a thing would be uncalled for when he had come all this way to say something important to her. She tried her best to hide her thoughts, to show him that same smiling face that she always had. She didn't know that she was failing miserably.

Not that Keitaro was in such a good situation to read people, anyway. His thoughts were similar to Kanako's, except he really was screaming at himself to just come out with it. All this was just him rationalizing it to himself, after all.

"Kanako, I don't want to see you suffering any more. I'm still not completely sure, but let's go for it. Even if it's for a little while, let's try it out."

Keitaro blurted out abruptly and turned his face away. He could feel his face become hot. Even though the words hadn't quite come out the way he had wanted, he had said what he had come here to say.

"..."

She really wasn't making it any easier for him. Still staring out into space, he listened to the silence that filled the room. After a few seconds, he turned back to face Kanako, who finally spoke at this point.

"So, what you're saying, onii-chan, is that you want to go out with me? That you want me to be your girlfriend?"

"Y... yeah..."

He was a bit embarrassed by the bluntness with which she had said those words, but he continued to look down at her face. He was glad he did, because he was quickly rewarded with a pretty sight, of Kanako's face slowly turning into a smile, wider than he had ever seen before. In fact, there was something even more to it, a certain glint in her eyes and glow to her cheeks that seemed truer, more genuine than any other smile he had ever seen on her.

"Onii-chan!"

As if something had suddenly exploded, Kanako suddenly burst out from under her blanket, grabbing him and forcing him onto the floor. Her chin on Keitaro's shoulder, and her arms around his neck, she squeezed him against her body, which Keitaro noticed was clad only in a pair of pink panties. The feeling of the hot skin of her stomach and small breasts on his clothed front wasn't exactly unpleasant, but combined with the boldness with which she had popped out, it was enough to make him feel uncomfortable.

"Thank you."

Kanako picked herself up on her hands, separating their bodies a bit and giving them room to look at each other. She leaned down and began to lightly nibble at his lips.

"I know this mustn't have been easy for you, onii-chan... so I promise... you won't regret this..."

After speaking in between pecks, she began to kiss him more deeply, closing her eyes and mashing her lips into his. Still a little taken aback, Keitaro returned the kiss timidly. Almost instinctively, the two opened their mouths at the same time and began running their tongues over the other's.

"In fact, right now..."

Kanako pulled back and almost immediately pounced at his waist. Before Keitaro could react, she had already unbuttoned and unzipped his jeans.

"Wait, Kanako, now's probably not a good time... we can... tonight..."

"Oh, we'll be sure to have fun tonight, onii-chan. But you owe me for waking me from that dream. I didn't get to finish it in my sleep, so..."

Kanako forcefully pulled down his pants and then his underwear down to his knees.

"So, I'm going to have to finish it now."

Without warning, she took his penis in her mouth. It was still soft at this point, although it had slowly been growing, and it was growing and getting harder even faster now. Out of the corner of his eye, Keitaro could see Kanako reach under her own underwear. Seeing her fingers move about under the pink cloth made his erection twitch and grow even harder inside of Kanako's mouth.

"Ohhh... Kanako... that's good..."

There was no longer any will to resist, and Keitaro just leaned back and enjoyed the service. With just the tip of his now fully erect member in her mouth, Kanako was bobbing her head up and down in a steady rhythm. Moving faster were her hands, one still buried between her legs and the other quickly stroking the shaft of his penis. Every few moments, Keitaro could feel and hear her let out a squeak or a moan, and once he picked himself up onto his elbows, he could see that the area of the panties between her legs was much darker than the rest, soaked from her flowing lubricants.

"S-so, Kanako... y-you were dreaming about... about this?"

Keitaro looked down at Kanako's moving face and asked.

"Of- of course, onii-chan. I would have these... these types of dreams all-all the time... but, but now, I won't have to..."

Even though she pulled her head back, Kanako still had some difficulty speaking thanks to her fingers that were still squirming about violently between her legs. She lowered her head and started moving again, faster than she had before. She sucked and squeezed with her mouth as her pace became faster and faster.

"Oh! Ka-Kanako... I'm close..."

Keitaro sat himself up and held Kanako's face tenderly at the cheeks. His tightly closed eyes and strained face told Kanako that she wouldn't have to wait long. She, too, was getting close to her orgasm, and she found herself letting out her loud hums more and more frequently, something that Keitaro both noticed and enjoyed. He ran his fingers through her hair and lightly scratched her scalp as he felt himself near the threshold.

"Kanako... I'm...!"

Keitaro could barely let out those words before he came. Kanako swallowed voraciously when she felt the first biggest load spill into her mouth. She did the same for the second spurt as well, but by the time a third load trickled out, she had reached her orgasm as well, and all she could do was hum loudly as her mouth began to fill up. She loved the taste of him, and rolling his semen around in her mouth only enhanced the waves of pleasure that flowed through and shook her body.

Finally, both bodies relaxed. Keitaro fell back onto the floor while he felt Kanako swallow and disengage. Her hot and heavy breaths tickled his naked thighs as she helped him pull his clothes back on. She then crawled over next to him on the hard wood floor and snuggled up to him. The two held each other in silence for a long time before either of them spoke.

"It's about time for breakfast, isn't it?"

"Th-that's why I told you now wasn't a good time!"

"Well, what's done is done. Let me get dressed and we can go down and see what Shinobu has cooked up."

***

That night, the two entered Kanako's room holding hands. To them, it had been a pretty interesting day. Keitaro still had qualms about letting everyone know about their relationship - and if she had to be honest, Kanako had some as well; after all, she had not believed that it would ever happen, and it was only now that she began to acknowledge its rather taboo nature - and they had decided to keep it hidden for now. During the times when they were with the other members of the Inn, they could only smile at each other silently like two kids sharing a secret and hope that no one would notice. Due to various duties, neither had had much of a chance to see each other that day, anyway.

And that's why, for privacy ironically, they had decided to have dinner together outside that evening - a date, if you will. An excuse was convenient enough to make; after all, what was unnatural or suspicious about two siblings having dinner together, especially after not having seen each other for years? Although actually using this excuse did remind both of them the whole reason why they were being secretive in the first place.

But at dinner, all the tenseness and nervousness had disappeared. Even though Kanako was his sister, Keitaro had had missed some of the most formative years of her life. And despite all of her research skills, Kanako had not actually had a regular conversation with her brother in years. There was plenty to talk about, plenty to learn about each other that evening. Each time Kanako said "onii-chan," Keitaro felt a strange nervous feeling go through his chest, but she was all smiles that entire evening, and Keitaro tried to be, too.

It was quite late when they had returned to the Inn, and everyone was in their rooms. It was at this point that the two had gone straight for Kanako's room. And so they stood in her lit room, smiling at each other after an enjoyable evening.

Kanako was the first to act. She stood up on her toes and kissed Keitaro's lips, for the first kiss that they had shared all night; Keitaro had felt uncomfortable about doing it in public, especially with her calling him "onii-chan" all the time. Her hands roamed on his chest for a bit before undoing the buttons on his shirt one by one.

"Is now a good time, onii-chan?"

Once she completely unbuttoned Keitaro's shirt, she stepped back and helped him out of it. Keitaro stepped forwards and held her body to his, feeling her oft-worn white vest and black dress on his bare skin. He whispered into her ear.

"Heh, of course it is."

Then, without warning, he picked her up, supporting her at the knees and back, and carried her to her futon which still hadn't been put away since that morning. He placed her on it gently and, facing her, lied next to her. He leaned down into her face for a quick kiss before getting up to his knees and moving himself towards the other end of the futon, near her feet.

"Onii-chan...?"

Kanako raised her head and asked. She was still as calm as ever, although she was definitely curious.

"It's nothing. I just have to... pay you back for this morning."

Keitaro positioned himself between her feet and rolled off Kanako's black socks. He placed a light peck on each sole and smiled at the giggles that came from Kanako's mouth caused by the tickling. Choosing one leg, he began to plant light kisses on the inside, following it up and under the skirt part of her dress. His hands slid around both of her legs, and he slowly spread them apart as he did this. By the time Keitaro reached the black spandex that covered her lower torso, Kanako's dress was bunched up at her waist. With a little difficulty, he pulled the spandex down and off of her before putting his face back between her legs.

His tongue continued the path that he had been making before Kanako's clothing had gotten in the way, and it eventually found her genitals, slightly moist with her fluids. He ran it slowly up and down her labia while his fingers grazed over the sensitive skin on the inside of her thighs. Keitaro took in a deep breath. His nose was being tickled not only by her hair, but also by her scent, the odd smell of the fluids coming out of her vagina and the smell of her sweat. It made him feel incredibly turned on, and his pants were quickly feeling much too tight.

"Mmm... Onii-chan..."

Kanako just lied back and enjoyed the soft touches from her brother. She was breathing very heavily, letting out soft moans every few breaths, and she couldn't stop her legs from trembling.

Keitaro moved onto her clitoris and began to flick it lightly with his tongue and to nibble on it with his lips. At that, he heard Kanako's voice become louder and noticed how much more quickly her juices were flowing out of her vagina. Eager to lick it all up, he covered that part with his mouth. He alternated between attacking her clitoris and running his tongue between her labial lips to scoop up more of her liquids.

"You taste good, Kanako."

Keitaro raised his head up over Kanako's bunched up dress and spoke.

"Hah, th-thank you, onii-chan... it feels... you're really good, too..."

Kanako also raised her head and, looking at Keitaro through her eyes unfocused due to the pleasure, spoke to him. Keitaro winked at her and lowered his head again and resumed his service. Pushing his mouth hard against her crotch, he shook his head a bit while rubbing her clitoris around in circles with his tongue.

"Mmm!! Ah! Onii-chan, that's good!"

Kanako clawed at the bunched up cloth at her waist. Her breaths were becoming shorter, and the high pitched moans and quick gasps only encouraged Keitaro to work harder. Her juices were flowing freely now, some into his mouth and some down his chin, and their now-familiar taste tickled his tongue, still hard at work.

"Ah, oh, onii-chan!!"

Keitaro felt his sister's hands on his head, pushing him deeper into her. At the same time, her body started to convulse and a long hum came out from her throat as she came. Feeling Kanako pushing him into her, Keitaro stopped lapping at her clitoris and began to concentrate on lapping up the fluids still coming out of her vagina. He continued this until he felt her body relax, letting him pull his dirtied face out from between her legs.

"There, now we're even."

Looking at Kanako's half-closed eyes, Keitaro smiled. He reached down and began to push her dress up her body, planting kisses along her stomach and chest as they were revealed. He spent some extra time on her small erect nipples, and he smiled inwardly when he heard little yips from behind the black cloth that separated their faces. Finally, with Kanako's help, he pulled the dress, along with her vest, over her head and off onto the floor.

"Onii-chan..."

With Keitaro's head now right above hers, Kanako raised her head and kissed him softly on the lips. They pulled apart from each other for a bit in order for Keitaro to pull off all of his lower clothes. Through this, they continued to look into each others' eyes - Keitaro felt almost hypnotized by Kanako's blissful smile, and he couldn't tear his eyes away.

"I love you, onii-chan... And... I want you..."

Kanako hooked her legs around his hips and pulled him in closer to her. Even as Keitaro began to position the tip of his penis at her nether lips, he continued to stare into the eyes of Kanako, whose smile never faded while she spoke. His erection was at its full size and had been for a while, and although most of his pre-come had been absorbed by his underwear, thanks to Kanako's plentiful lubricants, it went in with no difficulty.

"Mmm... Kanako..."

Keitaro moaned as his penis, having felt the tightness of his pants until now, was surrounded by a more pleasant and warmer tightness. Helped on by Kanako's heels that were pushing him from the back, he inserted his penis into her little by little until it was in all the way to the hilt.

"Oh... onii-chan...!"

Kanako's continued smile took on a bit of an odd look as she began to pant and had to open her mouth.

"Onii-chan, I... I feel so full inside... I love you, onii-chan!"

Like what she had done with her legs, Kanako wrapped her arms around Keitaro's body and squeezed him, pushing him into her as far as he could possibly go. This action made it a little difficult for him when he started to move, but he didn't mind; the feeling of her small breasts pushing up into his chest, her warm cheek rubbing up against his own, and her ragged breaths tickling his ear was overwhelmingly pleasant.

"Kanako..."

They started off slowly, both bodies rocking back and forth, coming apart and then softly colliding into each other. Sticky with Kanako's sweat, the skin on their stomachs clung to each other and tried to hold them together each time Keitaro pulled back.

"Onii-chan... you... you feel so good inside me..."

Hearing Kanako's voice, at a higher pitch than usual, mixed in with her sweet moans sent a tingle down Keitaro's spine. At her words, he felt a twitch in his penis, which, embraced and stimulated by Kanako's insides, was providing him with an incredible amount of pleasure.

"But... onii-chan... faster... please, faster..."

Kanako's legs tightened around him even more, and she began to move her body faster, as fast as her position would allow. Keitaro quickened his pace as well, and with his smaller range of motion, he found that his front remained flush with Kanako's continually. Unconsciously, he reached for her hands and intertwined their fingers together, squeezing hard as his pleasure grew closer to the limit.

"Kanako... I'm... I'm going to... I'm close..."

Using his hands as leverage, Keitaro lifted his body up and looked at Kanako. She was still smiling that odd smile, but with her mouth open and her face cringed, it looked somewhat funny. Well, he didn't really have the ability to think about humor at this point, anyway.

"M... me too, onii-chan...! Let's... let's come together!"

Keitaro could see tears rolling out of the corners of her eyes, making a zigzag pattern down to her ears as his pounding shook her. It confused him, seeing her cry like this; was he hurting her? She was fine that first time two nights ago. He wanted to stop, but he found that he couldn't, his orgasm too close and his raw lust taking over him. All he could manage to do was to kiss her and to hope that that would at least partially make up for whatever pain he was causing in her.

"Mmmm!!!"

As their tongues intertwined and spiraled around, Keitaro wasn't sure who it was that started to moan first and to send vibrations into the other's mouth. Either way, it was then that he felt himself reach his peak and send streams of his semen into Kanako. At the same time, Kanako's legs wrapped around him more tightly, so tightly that it hurt his waist and made breathing a little difficult. They squeezed each other's hands and continued their kiss as they both rode out their orgasms.

"Mmmm..."

Even after their orgasms had subsided, they kept kissing each other with Keitaro's now flaccid penis still inside Kanako's vagina. Their bodies relaxed, and forced to breathe through their noses, they took in each other's scent, strong from the sweat both had just expelled.

"Hah, hah, Kanako..."

Keitaro was the one to disengage, pulling back his head and taking in some deep breaths.

"Are you okay? You were... you were crying..."

Kanako smiled up at him, her eyes now no longer overflowing. She wiped away her tears and placed a light peck on his cheek.

"No, it was fine, onii-chan... it was just... I felt so happy, feeling you inside me... knowing that... you really were mine from now on..."

Kanako's eyes welled up again as she spoke, but before she could wipe away those new tears, Keitaro's own fingers did the job. He then rolled over next to her and whispered into her ear.

"Yes, Kanako... I'm yours..."

Kanako blushed at that and looked away, but her smile showed her just how joyful those words had made her.

"You know, it's been a while since we've slept together."

Keitaro spoke while getting up to turn off the lights and to grab an extra pillow. He put back on his boxers before getting onto the futon back next to Kanako and covering them with the blanket.

"But onii-chan, won't the others find out? You said you didn't want-"

"It's okay. I can wake up early and sneak back."

Keitaro felt his heart beat harder when Kanako mentioned that. That's right, he still wanted to keep their relationship hidden. The two slowly fell asleep with each other, Kanako resting her head on Keitaro's arm and her hands on his chest and in his hair. As Keitaro's brain started to shut down and he drifted off to sleep, he could hear Kanako softly whisper.

"I love you... onii-chan..."

"I love you too, Kanako..."

In his tired, half-asleep mind, amidst a sea of subconscious thoughts flowing uncontrolled around each other, one thought came to the surface.

'That's right... I'm her onii-chan... and she is my little sister...'
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Interestingly enough, this story is only about 4400 words, about 75% of the length of the first story. I found that odd after writing this, because I had a lot more happen in this chapter than the first. I think it speaks mainly about how much shorter my sex scenes have gotten. I don't know, I spent some time working on Garden of Thanatos (http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600041477), and I might be having a bit of burnout with those scenes, with having so many scenes (especially with 3+ people) in that story. But overall, I'm fairly happy with how those scenes turned out in this story; they still feel a bit slower and more intimate than the scenes in Garden of Thanatos.

As mentioned in the previous chapters, I never planned to turn this into a multi-chapter series - it was the reviews encouraging me to make it into one that got me to do it. So I'm giving it a shot. Also as I mentioned before, I don't have much experience writing fiction and none writing romance, which is why I kinda glaze over almost all the details in this story and just go straight for the intimate scenes and the sex scenes. There, too, I concentrate more on physical details than emotional or mental ones - this I see as my biggest weakness.

As usual, reviews and ratings are greatly appreciated. Without those, I never would have written as much as I have.

Any hatemail, comments, compliments can be sent to haruha.raharu[at]gmail.com.