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Forty-Two
Very good. You found the hidden chapter! While there
isn't actually much here in the way of story, I figured I'd share with you some
of the hardships I've taken regarding this story. If you haven't yet read to your
heart's content and you don't want to have it spoiled, I suggest turning back
now. However, if you're all done and are just looking for some post-coitus,
well, I'm your man.
Oh, FYI, the sex between Hasukawa and Shun is in Chapter Fifteen. If that's all you wanted to
read, feel free to check it out.
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d84/Miketoth/MAP.jpg
This is the map I used when I rewrote the beast. To
figure out how few times you'd have to read to get every chapter, I used
colored markers. I quickly learned that it would take more colors than I had
available (that is, >144) to plot each unique path. I used cobinometric-math to approximate that one.
This was
such an involved process that a lot of ideas had to be scrapped. Which is kind of a shame, really, since there's still a lot that
can be done with this story line. Because some things just couldn't be
worked into the actual plot, I thought it would be fun to draft up little
vignettes that kinda embody the spirit of a few other options. So, think of
this as an Easter egg. Let's go!
Hasukawa as a girl: After banging his head, Kazuya is convinced that he's
of the female persuasion and tries to court Shun and possibly the semapis. Hilarity ensues as Shun proves to be both more
masculine than Hasukawa and as Hasukawa tries on some of Shun's more girly
things, convinced that they're his.
Shun thinks he's a girl: So obvious. Shun bangs his head instead and plays up
being a girl to the girliest extremes. Gets all
giggly and embarrassed about sharing a room with a boy, tries to mac on Hasukawa which totally confuses (and arouses?) him,
and flips out when he realizes he has a penis. Hilarity ensues.
Shun actually is a girl but plays it off as a boy: The bang to the head results in a comatic dreamworld where Shun
actually is a girl and has been doing a great job at pretending to be a boy.
Obviously 'AU,' results in many dodges, heterosexual relations (boring) and
some tricky gadgets that allow her to pee standing up.
Hasukawa/Shinobu/Mitsuru threeway:
NO.
Hasukawa kidnaps Sumire-chan (WTF?): Also, no.
The alternate song ending: Rather than do "Fly me to the moon," the
boys do a rap to some Gorillaz, or something. I'm
thinking they do "Sabotage" by the Beasties Boys. That'd be sweet!
Can you imagine Shun and Hasukawa
playing detective and then doing it? That'd be hot. And you know they
have to finish up with some "Paul Revere."
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