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Loss and Redemption	By : hawker748 Category: +G to L > Love Hina Views: 24929 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 1
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Disclaimer: See Prologue.

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This fanfic is based on the manga and anime and
borrows facets from both of them.

�*� Spoken words

�*� Thoughts

�Do you feel better
now, Keitaro?� Motoko asked. She was still straddling him so he had to look up
over his shoulder to see her.

�I�d feel better if
you hadn�t stopped,� he thought. �Yes, thank you Motoko. The stiffness is gone
now.� �Most of it anyway.�

She pushed herself
off of him and stood up. �I�m sorry that I�ve been so harsh a sensei Keitaro,
you didn�t deserve it.�

�What do you mean,
Motoko?�

�I mean you�ve done
everything that�s been asked of you and more without complaint,� she replied.
�You�ve been there for me, comforted me, and you even saved my life. And I
still treated you like you were just another student,� she concluded sadly.

Keitaro looked up at
her for a few minutes, trying to determine what to say. Finae sae said, �Please
don�t be sad Motoko, you don�t deserve any more sadness. There�s no need to
apologize, you�re just trying to do your best.� With a small smile he added,
��Sides, I think I work better with stern discipline.� He was startled when an
image came into his mind unbidden of Motoko in a dominatrix outfit, causing him
to blush.

�You�re very kind
Keitaro. If you�ll excuse me, I have to prepare for bed,� she stated as she
walked out the door.

As soon as the door
closed Keitaro released all of the facial control he had been using and he
struggled to catch his breath. �My God, that was� hot! Where did she learn to
do that?!� he wondered as he attempted to get his blood flow back down to
normal.

His efforts at
self-control were hampered when Motoko re-entered the room. �He�s looking at
me,� she realized. She had to admit she kind of liked having him look at her
like that. �Just a little tenderness seems to work wonders.� She then started
to change into her nightshirt with out making much of an effort to conceal
herself from Keitaro.

For Keitaro this was
exquisite torture. He knew that he cared for Naru and that maybe he even loved
her, but he had NEVER been this excited by her, not even in that hotel room in
Kyoto. He�d never been this excited before in his life. He longed to take
Motoko in his arms and make her his, but he knew that if he did everything
would change. This gave him pause, as he wasn�t sure that he wasn�t just
feeling lust right now.

�O.K., it probably
is lust,� he reluctantly concluded.

�Alright, it IS
lust,� he admitted finally.

Keitaro didn�t want
to do anything that would end up hurting anyone, so he was able to mentally put
down his hormones. While he�d been having an internal debate, Motoko finished
dressing and laid down on her futon and turned out the light.

�Goodnight Keitaro,�
she whispered in a throaty voice that caused the hairs on the back of his neck,
among other things, to stand up.

�G, goodnight
Motoko,� he replied hesitantly. As he lay there, thinking back to what had just
happened, he remembered his promise to get her back in the Shinmei School. That
more than anything helped kill the last traces of desire in systsystem. �She
wants to be a warrior, not a wife. Remember that and throttle back!� But a
small voice was asking him if that was what HE wanted

Having somewhat
reluctantly decided on what he believed to be the right course of action,
Keitaro closed his eyes and attempted to fall asleep. Only tonight, sleep was
the farthest thing from his mind.

�This is gonna be a
long night,� he thought miserably.

End Chapter Four /p>

Coming Soon: Chapter
5

Yet again, Thanks to
Harvey Bautista for riding shotgun on this story and pre-reading it.
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