Drogons Rebirth | By : Xyaqom Category: -Misc Anime > AU - Alternate Universe Views: 1464 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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Note: Nothing much to say about this chapter. This chapter is basically a retelling of Brad's dream of how he was able to score a date with Hannah. I found nothing wrong with the chapter from the original story, so I didn't change it much, but I added a few extensions to certain scenes just to spice things up. Also, I should probably mention this since it will be discussed in the review section. When this chapter was originally made, Koan Seinaruyami was written off and replaced by Ashley while also throwing jabs at the character despite what happened in the original story.
That was over a year ago when this chapter was written. A lot can happen in a year, and what I mean by that is a point of view can be changed. A year ago, people hated Koan Seinaruyami, especially myself, for what he did to the Drogons and how he was written as a character. But as time went on and as the hatred started to go away, I began to realize that the only reason why Koan was written the way he was was because of... Well... Prime.
I don't want to throw Lewamus Prime under the bus, but you already know how the Crimson Darkness arc went down, especially behind the scenes. But a year after the Crimson Darkness arc concluded, my resentment for Koan had passed, and I began to lean on the idea of giving Koan a second chance. A chance to redeem himself for all the readers stuck with the Drogon Universe. So, after talking to Prime, I told him that I'm willing to give Koan Seinaruyami a chance to redeem himself in Drogons Rebirth under one condition. If I had full creative control over his character.
So yeah, Koan will be written as a calmer character than before, but he's not going to make an appearance as Crimson Darkness until much later in the story. At least for THIS story. And another story, however, he will be front and center.
That's right, we're going to make a spinoff story for Koan that takes place in the same continuity as Drogons Rebirth. Koan's upbringing as Crimson Darkness will be featured in this remake of The Adventures Of Crimson Darkness. As of this entry, we have already made nine chapters, and chapter ten is in the making. We're really excited about this new rewrite for Crimson Darkness, and I hope you all are willing to give him a second chance when the story of venture Lee comes out.
Also, to close off this long author's note, I would like to thank Alvin D-Rod for helping me put this chapter together. So go check out his stories after you are finished reading this chapter.
Anyways, with no further ado, let's get started on this chapter.
Warning: This story is NOT for readers under the age of eighteen. The story will have coarse language, violence, nudity (including the private parts), and sexual scenes. (Including sex scenes). The story will explain a character's surroundings in great detail, especially with a person's body. If you are not over eighteen or do not like these things in a story, please do not read this book/story. You have been warned!
Chapter Six:
September 13th, 2017:
Brad's First Date:
Later that night, Brad was getting ready for bed in his room. He went to his dresser to take out his PJs. However, when he went to do so, he felt something solid. Interested, he pulls it out and sees a picture of him and a girl, who was 5'2 feet tall and weighed 135 pounds. She had short brown hair down to her shoulders and blue eyes. Both of them were wearing street clothes. When Brad saw this picture, his heart skipped a beat.
"Hannah... it's hard to believe that it's been a year already. Even though I'm a lot better now than I was before... I still miss you.
After Brad was finished looking at the picture, he put it away, put on his pj's, and went to bed. While Brad was sleeping, he began to dream about how Brad and Hannah got together.
Dream/Flashback: Five Years Ago:
May 7th, 2012:
In Christale High school, a younger Brad (Who was fifteen years old and was 5'4 feet Tall at the time) was in the school halls and seemed to be hiding from someone, as he seemed to be checking every corner. He continues to do this until he sees Hannah, the love of his life. She wore a school uniform, a black button shirt, and a blue mini skirt. Men just wore a black shirt and black pants.
'Hello, my name is Brad Jackel. I'm fifteen, a grade ten student at Christale High School. You're probably wondering what I'm doing. Well, put it simply, I'm trying to ask a girl out that I've been trying to ask for the last year now. That girl that I'm trying to ask is Hannah Sirener. The most beautiful girl in school. Last year I was framed for a crime that I did not commit, and I almost got expelled and sent to prison, but that's when Hannah came and saved me from getting falsely convicted. Since then, I've been trying to ask her out, but I have failed to do so every time! After feeling to ask her out for so long, you would think that I would get discouraged. But not me! I'm willing to battle the gods if I have to ask Hannah out!'
Brad sees that Hannah talked to her close friends, Katherine and Lily. Katherine was 5'3 feet tall and weighed 130 pounds in 2013; Lily was 4'8 feet tall and weighed 100 pounds in 2013. Facial features, however, weren't all that different.
'Okay, this is the day, the day that I'm going to make this the happiest day of my life... which is today,' The more Brad looked at Hannah, the more his heart began to beat, and the harder it was for him to breathe, he then shakes it off, 'Come on, Brad, get a hold of yourself, just walk over there and ask her out. That's all you have to do!'
Brad took a deep breath and prepared to walk toward Hannah. That is, he heard his name being called out.
"Hey, Brad, what's up?"
Brad is startled after he hears his name being called out. He looks behind him and sees his younger sister, Ashley, and his best friend, Koan Seinaruyami. Ashley was 5'0 and weighed 120 pounds back in 2012. In facial features, however, she wasn't all that different. Koan Seinaruyami was 5'5 and weighed 130 pounds. He had orange hair and blue eyes. He also had fair skin, wore glasses, and was slim.
"Ashley?! Koan?! Guys, not right now. I'm busy right now!" He turns around and sees that Hannah is gone, "What?! NO! She's gone already?!"
"Oh, sorry, Brad, we didn't know you were busy staking Hannah," teased Koan.
"Yeah, if we knew, we would've texted you," said Ashley.
"I'm not staking her! I'm just waiting for the perfect moment to ask her out, that's all!" Shouted Brad.
"Right," said Ashley and Koan, not believing him.
During lunchtime, Brad, Koan, and Ashley are seen sitting at a table in the cafeteria eating their lunch.
"So Brad, why do you want to ask Hannah so badly?" Asked Koan.
"Yeah, there must be a reason why you've been trying to ask her for the last year," Ashley said.
Brad's eyes open wide, "Seriously, you don't know?"
"No, not really. You keep saying that you want to ask her out but never explained why," said Koan.
"Wow, really, I thought I already told you two," Brad said in shock that he never told his sister or best friend why he wanted to ask Hannah out.
"Nope," said Koan.
"Wow, and here I thought that everybody knew at this point," he then sighs, "Okay, I'll tell you. It all started a year ago. I was walking down the hallway when I saw a bully beating up a student. I chased the guy off to save the student, but shortly after, the Principal came into the hallway and thought I was the one who beat the student up.
He took me to his office and was about to expel me, even though I told him I didn't do it. But then Hannah came in and told the Principal to look at the cameras. It was then he saw who really wrote that message on the wall. It was when I made up my mind to ask Hannah out as a way of thanking her," he then looks annoyed,
"However, for some odd reason, the world seems to hate me, as whenever I try to ask her out, something always seems to happen that will keep me from asking her out. I'm talking about getting hit in the face with a soccer ball, flower pots falling on my head, getting hit by a speeding truck, and getting hit by a stampede of elephants!"
Koan coughed while drinking his apple juice, "Wait a minute, did you make that last part up?" Asked Ashley.
"Maybe," said Brad.
"By the way, what's going on between you and Katherine? You stopped hanging out after you two got into High School," said Ashley.
"Well, ever since Hannah was transferred here. Katherine and Lily started hanging out with her. If they didn't hang out with Hannah all the time, I would hang out with them more often than lately. Whenever I approach Hannah, I become a nervous wreck, and then I am embarrassed myself in front of the girls," explained Brad.
"Oh, I see," said Ashley.
"Well, good luck with trying to ask Hannah out. I hope things turn out for you, and speaking of crushes, guess what I got?" Asked Koan.
"What?" Asked Brad, which Ashley was also curious about.
Koan takes out a case, opens it, shows Brad a silver necklace heart, and shows it to Brad and Ashley. Brad and Ashley become shocked after seeing the necklace.
"WHAT?! No way! Where did you get that?!" Asked Brad in shock.
"Oh my God, it is beautiful!" Said Ashley.
"I got it from a jewelry store. It cost me everything I had.
"But... why did you buy it?" Asked Brad.
"Well... Shelley's sixteen birthday party is coming soon, and I wanted to give her something special," said Koan, "I want her to know that I love her, and hopefully, after she sees this, she'll..." He blushes, "She'll see me as more than just a friend."
"Oh, I get it. You two have been friends since second grade, right?" Asked Ashley.
"That's right? Thanks to her, I don't get bullied as much as I did. But I fear that she only sees me as someone she needs to protect," he then puts the necklace away, "Hopefully, with this necklace, it will change everything."
"Well, good luck with that. I hope everything will turn out alright with you," said Brad.
"Yeah, let's hope she'll be over heels for you," said Ashley.
"Thanks and I hope everything will turn alright with you and Hannah, Brad," said Koan.
"Thanks," said Brad.
Later, after school hours, Brad and Ashley are seen exiting the school gate, and that's when he sees Hannah, who is just ten feet away from him.
'There she is! Just a few feet ahead, I have to go up to her and ask her out; that's it!' Said Brad in his thoughts.
"Brad, I know what you're thinking, so don't-"
Before Ashley could finish, Brad started to run toward Hannah. However, he only got halfway to her when he suddenly heard a dog bark. Brad looked towards where the bark was coming from and saw an angry dog angrily barking at him and trying to escape from its master.
"Um... Nice doggie," said Brad nervously.
"Brad!" Said Ashley as she ran towards Brad.
The Dog Owner was trying to calm his dog, "Rex, stop!"
The dog broke free from his leash and ran towards Brad. Fearing for his life, Brad ran towards the nearest tree and climbed on it. Later, the owner calmed his dog down and got it on a new leash.
"I'm sorry about that; Rex is normally not like that; he normally acts well around people; I have no idea why he would act like that," said the dog owner.
"It's okay," said Brad to the dog owner as he began to climb down, 'I can't believe this dog made me lose Hannah! Why does the world hate me so much? WHAT THE HELL DID I DO TO DESERVE THIS?!'
Later, Brad and Ashley returned home, and Brad looked disappointed.
"I hate my life," groaned Brad.
"I just don't get it, Brad. I mean, there are tons of other girls at school. Why is Hannah the only girl for you?" Asked Ashley.
"Do I have to repeat myself?" Asked Brad, asking if he needed to explain it to her again.
"No, you don't. But it's been a year now. maybe the gods above are trying to tell you something?" Asked Ashley.
"Well, I'm not going to listen to them! I will ask Hannah if it's the last thing I do!" Shouted Brad with pride.
Ashley was shaking her head because she remembered the times that Brad had tried to confess to Hannah over the year, but every time was a little funny and embarrassing to see Brad like that.
"Anyways, I'm going to have a bath," said Brad heading to the bathroom.
"Okay," said Ashley.
While Brad was having a bath, he started to think out loud.
"Damn it, what am I going to do? No matter what I do, I can't seem to ask Hannah out. Whenever I do, something always gets in the way. Like seriously, who did I anger to have this streak of bad luck? If I don't act quickly, Koan will get a girlfriend before I do, and I'll be left in the dust. And once he gives that necklace to Shelley, she'll surely fall for him. Koan already has his plan put down; that leaves me. But what can I do to help me win Hannah's heart?" A lightbulb suddenly lit up above his head, "Wait, I got it; I'll write a letter. Yeah, I'll do that!" He gets out of the bath and dries himself off with the towel and pulls the plug in the bath, and puts his towel around his waist and was about to open the door until he suddenly got a feeling, "That's weird; why am I getting a feeling that something was supposed to happen right here, right now?" He then shrugs it off, "Oh well, I don't think it was anything special.
After exiting the bathroom and putting his PJs on, he took out a pen and paper and wrote:
Dear Hannah Sirenler
A year ago, I was mistaken for beating up a student.
You saved me from getting expelled by telling the Principal who really beat up that students.
Ever since that day, I have grown feelings for you.
Will you please go out with me?
-Brad Jackel-
Brad decided to keep the letter short, sweet, and to the point, as he didn't want the letter to be five minutes long. So, after writing the letter, he put it in an envelope, sealed it, and wrote her name on it.
"Okay, I did it, I wrote her the letter, now all I have to do is... give it... to... her, "He remembers what happened earlier today, "GIVE IT TO HER?! Shit! I didn't think of that. I didn't think that far ahead! Shit! I can't even get near her because something always happens each time I try to get near her! I'll never be able to get near her at this point. Wait, I got it. I'll slide it into her locker. Yeah, that's what I'll do."
"Brad, dinner's ready," said Ashley from downstairs.
"Oh, coming!" Said Brad puts the letter on his desk and goes downstairs to have dinner.
May 8th, 2012:
The next day, Brad woke up early to go to school. He wanted to get to school before Hannah arrived. That way, when she goes up to her locker for the first time of the day, she will see it. Brad woke up at 6:00 am, much earlier than 7:30, when he normally wakes up. He crawls out of bed, has a shower, gets dressed, has breakfast, and runs out the door, all before Ashley even wakes up. Brad ran to school as fast as he could. When he got to school, he was the only one since most students were still sleeping or getting ready for school. Because Brad has been stalking... I mean, following Hannah for the last two years, he basically knows Hannah's schedule, including where her locker is. Mind you, a student's locker is always different every year, but since Brad has followed Hannah since the beginning of this school year, he already knows where Hannah's locker is for this school year.
Once Brad finds Hannah's locker, he takes out the letter from his pocket and slides it into her locker using the pinholes on the locker.
"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Take that world! Now you won't be able to screw with me anymore! Hannah will soon read the letter, and there won't be anything you can do about it. He then takes out his phone and looks at it; there's still an hour and thirty minutes left before school starts. I guess I can go to the library and wait until then."
Later, at lunchtime, Brad, Koan, and Ashley sat at one of the tables in the cafeteria eating their lunch. Even though Brad slid the letter into Hannah's locker, he worried she might not get it. Ashley and Koan noticed that Brad was nervous about something, as he noticed his hand was twitching.
"Um... Brad... are you okay?" Asked Ashley.
"No, I'm not. I'm freaking scared," said Brad, sounding like he was going crazy.
"Why are you scared?" Asked Koan.
"Okay, so... last night, I wrote a letter to Hannah, asking her to go out with me, I woke up extra early to get to school before her, and I slid the letter into her locker that way, she would for sure get it."
"Um... okay, that still doesn't explain why you're scared," said Koan.
"Well, the thing is... I've been doing some thinking. For the last two years, I've been trying to ask Hannah out, but something would get in the way whenever I did. Like, today, what if the letter I put in her locker somehow grew arms and legs and climbed out? Like... what if... WHAT IF!"
"Brad... I think you're paranoid," said Koan.
"OH GEE, YOU THINK?!"
"Um... excuse me?"
Brad, Koan, and Ashley turn their heads and see two girls standing before him. One of them was Hannah, and the other was Katherine. When Brad sees Hannah, his face turns pale, and he freezes. He couldn't believe that Hannah was standing right in front of him. Now that his plan had worked, he had no idea what to do next.
"Are you Brad Jackel?" Asked Hannah.
'Holy shit, I can't believe my plan worked, but now that it has, I have no idea what to do next. I should be formal. That way, she won't think I'm weird,' said Brad in his thoughts, "Why yes, I am. May I help you?" Asked Brad, trying to be a gentleman.
"Trying to be formal, are we?" Teased Ashley.
"Shut up! I'm not letting you ruin this for me!" Glared Brad to Ashley.
"Wait! Brad?! Of all the people who could've written that letter, you're the one?! Wasn't stalking Hannah enough for you?!" Asked Katherine.
"Stalking me?" Asked Hannah
After hearing that girl say that, Brad's face turned pale as a ghost, his jaw dropped, and Ashley and Koan began to laugh.
'Shit, she knows I've been following her; I need to come up with a good reason I've been following her; wait, I got it!' He then looks at Hannah, "Stalking you? Heavens, I've only been trying to get your attention."
"Oh, and why are you trying to get my attention?" Hannah asks him.
"Well, you see, when you saved me from getting expelled a year ago, I wanted to ask you out to thank you. However, something would get in the way whenever I tried to ask you. So finally, writing that letter to you was the only thing I could think of to get your attention. But now that I've finally got your attention..." He then stands up and bows to Hannah, "Hannah Sirenler, will you please go out with me?"
"I wouldn't trust him, Hannah. I can smell the scent of desperation all over him," said Katherine.
"D-Desperate?! What makes you think that I'm desperate?!" Asked Brad.
"You've been trying to ask Hannah out for the last year now. Most guys would've given up after three attempts. But you didn't seem to get the picture," said Katherine.
"Well, maybe I really like her, ever thought of that?!" Asked Brad.
"You're not the first boy to ever like Hannah," said Katherine.
"And he most likely won't be the last," said Ashley, making Koan laugh and spit out his milk.
"Exactly," said Katherine.
"WILL YOU SHUT UP! YOU'RE NOT HELPING!" Shouted Brad to Ashley.
"Wow, what a show, but maybe you should turn around and look at Hannah now," Koan tells Brad softly. Brad turns around to see Hannah, and she blushes red.
"Hey, Hannah, what's wrong?" Asked Katherine.
"That was really cute," Hannah told her friend softly.
"What was?" Asked Katherine.
"How he just confessed to me, just know," said Hannah.
Brad blinked for a minute, not realizing what Hannah meant by that. But then, the realization came to him. He told her friend that he liked Hannah, RIGHT IN FRONT OF HER! When Brad made this realization, his face turned pale and his eyes blank in a panic.
'SHIT! WHAT HAVE I DONE?!' Asked Brad in his thoughts.
"Okay, I've made up my mind. I'll go out with you," Said Hannah.
"WHAT?" Asked Ashley and Katherine in shock.
It took a minute for Brad to register what Hannah had just said. And when it did register, he, too, was shocked.
"REALLY?!" He shouted in excitement, but he quickly calmed himself down and became formal again, "I mean... ahem, I'm glad to hear that. So, where do you want to go?"
"Hannah, are you sure about this?" Asked Katherine.
"Yes, it's fine, Katherine. Besides, he seems to be a nice guy. Besides, if he wanted to hurt me, he would've done it by now," said Hannah.
"I suppose you're right," said Katherine.
"Um... That's great news. Um... Where would you like to go?" Asked Brad, trying to hold in his excitement.
"I've heard of a place called Tony's Place. How about we go there for lunch?" Asked Hannah.
"Sure, I've been there before; the food there is great," said Brad to Hannah, 'And thankfully, the prices there are low so that I won't be blowing forty bucks.'
"Well then, it's Tony place it is then. I'll see you tomorrow then," said Hannah, and she and Katherine turned around and left.
"Y-Yeah, see you tomorrow," said Brad.
After Hannah left and Brad's request was accepted, Brad stood there, not believing what had just gone down. For two years, he's been trying to ask Hannah out, and now, after all these years, he finally did it. All sorts of emotions were going through his head. But, Ashley and Koan soon noticed that Brad was just standing there, not saying a single word.
"Um... Brad... is everything okay?!" Asked Koan.
"I... I need to be alone for a few minutes... excuse me," He then runs to the nearest bathroom. Once he enters the bathroom, he starts celebrating, "YES! I FINALLY DID IT! I FINALLY MANAGED TO ASK HANNAH OUT! HAHAHAHAHAHA!"
After Brad was done celebrating, he stepped out of the bathroom, only to have Koan and Ashley waiting for him.
"Feeling better now?" Asked Ashley.
"Yeah, sorry, I had to let that out of my chest."
"It's okay. I can understand why you were excited to accomplish your year-old goal finally. Anyways, congratulations on scoring a date with Hannah," Ashley said, congratulating Brad.
"Thanks," said Brad, putting a thumbs up.
After school, Brad walked back home with a huge smile. He could barely contain the excitement inside of him. As he and Ashley were making their way home, Ashley noticed that Brad was happy and decided to ask her brother what was up with his happy mood.
"You seem to be happy today, " Ashley said.
"Well, let's just say I've finally managed to ask Hannah out on a date," said Brad.
"WHAT?! Seriously?!"
"Yep, our date is tomorrow at Tony's Place.
"Wow, that's a surprise, so how were you able to ask her out?"
"I wrote her a letter and left it in her locker; the rest was smooth sailing."
"A letter, huh? That's kind of cheating, don't you think?"
"Well, I was starting to run out of options, and each time I tried to approach her, something would get in the way, so I wrote a letter to her, hoping she'd accept my offer. And she did; she accepted my request."
"Well, congratulations!"
May 9th, 2013:
The next day, Brad began to walk to Hannah's house.
"I know it's a little early, but I should walk her to the restaurant myself. That way, she'll think I'm a real gentleman," said Brad to himself.
Brad arrived at Hannah's house and pressed the doorbell. Thirty seconds later, Hannah opened the door, and Brad looked at what Hannah was wearing. Hannah was wearing a short white blouse that only went down just below her bellybutton, with the rest of her stomach showing, a pink mini skirt at her hip line, and wearing blue flip-flops. When Brad saw this, he was stunned; he couldn't believe Hannah's beauty.
"Wow, what a coincidence; I was just about to step out the door until you rang," said Hannah.
"Wow, I thought that maybe we should walk to the restaurant together," said Brad.
"Wow, how sweet of you; many boys I've gone out with have never done that before."
There was a short silence between the two. Brad couldn't help but stare at what Hannah was wearing. Finally, eventually, Hannah took notice.
"Um... is everything okay? Do you not like what I'm wearing?" Asked Hannah.
"Oh no, it's not that; it's actually the opposite. I guess I'm not used to seeing you wearing anything but your school uniform," said Brad.
"Oh, so you were expecting me to be naked?" Asked Hannah in a teasing tone.
Brad's face turns bright red, "WHAT?! No, that's not it at all!"
"I'm joking; I knew what you meant," giggled Hannah.
Brad sighs in relief, "Oh, okay."
"Anyways, should we go?"
"Yes, let's."
Brad and Hannah began walking to Tony's restaurant. While they were walking, Brad couldn't help but stare at Hannah and admire what she was wearing.
'It's good that I decided to wear two pairs of boxers under my pants before I came here, or else... I might've scared Hannah away,' said Brad in his thoughts.
"You know, you've been awfully quiet since we left," said Hannah.
"Oh, well..."
"Is my attire so eye-catching that you're speechless?" Asked Hannah in a teasing tone.
Brad began blushing, "Well, as I said, I'm so used to seeing you in your school uniform. Especially your blouse."
"What do you mean?" Asked Hannah.
"Well, don't you think your blouse is small for you?"
"Why do you ask?" Asked Hannah, confused.
"Well... I don't mean to sound like a pervert, but your blouse doesn't seem to cover your stomach, and if you raise your arms, your blouse will rise too, and your stomach will be exposed, and I don't mean to sound like a jerk but... you don't exactly have a flat stomach," said Brad.
"I see. Let me ask you a question: " She then stands in front of Brad and folds her arms over her head, raising her blouse to under her breast, exposing her entire stomach, "Do I look like I care about my stomach being exposed?" She giggled.
When Hannah raised her arms to expose her stomach, Brad was stunned. He believed that Hannah had a beautiful stomach. It was flat but soft. And because Hannah was only wearing her skirt at her hip line, Brad could see her entire stomach. Brad took notice of Hannah's bellybutton too. Hannah had an oval-shaped bellybutton. Seeing this was turning Brad on.
"W-Wow! That's a nice stomach you have," said Brad blushing red.
"Thank you. If you want, you can touch it," blushed Hannah.
"R-Really?" Asked Brad in shock
"Yeah, my girlfriends feel me up all the time, and I've gotten used to it," said Hannah.
"Um... okay."
Brad began to feel Hannah's stomach gently; it was very soft. The more Brad felt Hannah's stomach, the more he got turned on, and it showed on his face. Brad then began playing with Hannah's bellybutton, tickling her.
"It seems to me that you have a bellybutton fetish," giggled Hannah.
"Y-Yeah, I guess I do. You have a cute stomach and a cute bellybutton."
"Thank you," blushed Hannah. She puts her arms down, lowering her blouse, thus covering up her stomach, which made Brad pull his hand back, "Anyways, we should get going, or else we'll attract unwanted attention."
"R-Right. Let's go!" They start walking to the restaurant, 'Yep, I'm glad I chose to wear two boxers!' Said Brad in his thoughts.
Later, Brad and Hannah make it to Tony's Place. After they enter the building, they are greeted by a waitress. The waitress had short black hair with pigtails and wore glasses. She was also 5'2 and weighed 115 pounds.
"Welcome to Tony's Place," said the waitress.
"Lily, is that you?" Asked Hannah.
"Oh my God, Hannah. What a surprise," she then sees Brad, "And what do we have here? Are you on a date?"
Hannah blushes, "I guess you can say that."
"Wow, after all those failures, I thought you would have given up on men," said Lily, and hearing this made Brad raise his eyebrow.
"Well, I decided to give it another go, and things are going well. Anyways, you mind showing us our table."
"Oh, right, right this way," said Lily.
Lily showed Brad and Hannah to their table, which already had menus.
"I'll come back in a few minutes to take your order. Do you two want anything to drink?" Asked Lily.
"Just water for now," said Brad as he sat down.
"Yeah, same here," said Hannah.
"Okay," said Lily, turning around to get their drinks.
"Anyways, I'll be right back," said Brad as he prepared to stand up.
"Where are you going?" Asked Hannah.
"To the bathroom, I need to clean myself up a bit," said Brad.
"Why? You're not dirty."
Brad blushes, "Um... well... I'm very sweaty, and you don't want to spend our date with me all sweaty, do you?"
That's when Hannah figures out the real reason why Brad needs to go to the bathroom and smiles, "Is your face the only thing that needs cleaning?"
Brad's face turns bright red, "Um... Uh... I'll be back in a few minutes," he then runs to the bathroom.
"Okay," giggled Hannah.
Brad is seen washing his face in the bathroom after finishing "Cleaning himself up." After washing his face, Brad looks at himself in the mirror.
"Come on, Brad, get a hold of yourself. You finally scored a date with Hannah after all these years. So you're not going to back out now. Though I admit, I wasn't expecting her to be such a tease. But that's okay because if she's going to be teasing me, I'll tease her right back," said Brad to himself.
Brad returned to their table, where their drinks had arrived, and Hannah was waiting for him. That's when Brad decides to play the teaser.
"Feeling better?" Teased Hannah.
"Yes, now that I'm back here with you," teased Brad.
Hannah blushes more than last time, "Oh... are you saying you're happy to see me?"
Brad sits down, "Why yes, I am. I'm happy to see a beautiful girl like you.
Hannah blushes even more, "Oh... Brad... I didn't know you were such a charmer."
"There's a lot of stuff you don't know about me."
"Oh, please tell."
Just then, Lily returned with a pen and a notepad to take Brad and Lily's order.
"Okay, I'm back. So, have you two lovebirds figured out what to order?" Asked Lily.
Brad and Hannah soon realized that they'd been spending this whole time teasing each other when they should've been looking at the menu and deciding what to order.
Brad looks at the menu, "Um... I think I'll just have a burger and fries."
Hannah was looking at the menu, too, "I think I'll have the chicken wrap."
"Okay," she says as she takes the menus, I'll be back with your orders," she then leaves with the menus.
After Lily left, Brad decided to have a chat with Hannah.
"So, when we entered the building, your friend said something about all of your other dates that have failed. What's up with that?" Asked Brad.
"Oh, that, well... of all the dates I've been in, they always end as a failure," said Hannah.
"Why is that?"
"Well, I don't know why this is the case, but of all the boys I've dated, they either back out at the last minute or don't show up."
"Wow, really? No wonder your friend that you gave up on dating, and why your other friend didn't trust you. But, why did you choose to go out with me if that's the case?"
"Well, when you told me that you've been trying to ask me out for the last year, I felt bad for you, so I decided to accept your request."
"I see, so basically, to take pity on me. At least tell me this date is much better than all the other dates you've been in."
"Oh yes, definitely. So far, you haven't run off on me."
"Well, that's good."
About twenty minutes later, Brad and Hannah's food arrived, and they began eating lunch. After eating their lunch, Brad decided to pay for him and Hannah since the man always pays for the date.
Brad prepares to leave with Hannah. However, Brad tripped on the table leg, falling on Hannah. When Brad gained his composure, he noticed that his head was lying on something smooth and soft, and his hands-on something round and soft. When Brad opened his eyes, he saw Hannah's bellybutton and how close he was to it.
'Hannah's bellybutton? Oh no!'
Brad looks up and notices that both his hands are on Hannah's breasts. It turned out that when Brad fell on her, She fell with her arms raised, raising her blouse as well, thus exposing her stomach. All the people noticed this. All the men thought it was a miracle that Brad fell on Hannah like that, while all the women thought Brad was a pervert. When Hannah regained her composer, she noticed that Brad's face was on her stomach and his hands were on her breasts.
After Brad noticed that Hannah noticed where his hands were, his face turned dark red, and steam began to come out of his ears; he quickly jumped back.
"I'M SORRY! I'M SORRY! I DIDN'T MEAN TO! IT WAS AN ACCIDENT!" Shouted Brad in a panic.
"Wow, how bold of you," said Hannah.
Later, Brad and Hannah are on the streets, walking back to Hannah's place. The trip there was quiet as Brad was too embarrassed to speak to her. However, once they got to Hannah's house, Brad decided to apologize for what happened at Tony's Place.
"Look, Hannah, I'm really, REALLY sorry about what happened back there. I wasn't looking where I was going," said Brad.
"It's okay. It was an accident. Though I must admit that the way you fell on me was unusual. It was as if you wanted to see my stomach again," teased Hannah.
"Um... well... I... um..."
"Of course, if you wanted to see my stomach again," She takes her blouse and double knots it under her breasts, thus exposing her stomach, "All you had to do was ask me."
'Holy crap, I thought she would hate me at this point,' said Brad in his thoughts. Um... can I touch it?
"Sure," said Hannah as she put her arms around Brad's neck, "But first, I need to thank you," she then kissed Brad.
When Hannah kissed Brad, Brad was shocked that Hannah was kissing him, but eventually, Brad gave in and started kissing her back, or at least tried to; it was his first kiss. Then, eventually, the two pulled out to get air.
"Was that your first kiss?" Asked Hannah.
"Y-Yes," blushed Brad.
"Yeah, I could tell; it looks like we're going to have to work on that," she then kisses Brad again.
The kiss lasted longer, and Brad was a little better than last time.
They soon separated again to catch their breath.
"Well, I'll see you tomorrow," Hannah said.
"Tomorrow?" Asked Brad.
"Yeah, I'm not doing anything tomorrow, so we can simply hang out tomorrow."
"Yeah, that sounds good."
End Of Flashback/Dream:
Brad's dream was interrupted thanks to Brad's alarm clock. Brad reached over and turned off his alarm clock. After Brad turned off his alarm, Brad sat there for a few minutes, reflecting on his dream.
'I didn't know it back then. But that would be the last week that I would ever see Koan. Koan never did make it to Shelley's birthday party that day. It turns out that some lunatic broke into his place and killed him and his family, then burned down the house to get rid of the evidence. The person that killed him and his family are still out there. Hannah would be there to help me cope with the loss of my best friend. Unfortunately, little did I know that Hannah would also die two years later. Both my best friend and my first girlfriend would in two years.'
After reflecting on his dream, he picked himself up and prepared for school.
To Be Continued...
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