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Reviews for The Labyrinth

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  • From Scorpinac on December 18, 2007
    I'm starting to wonder if Meilin got to be in this at all... Still, though, good rendition of the scene, and I liked the touch with model airplane and finally the copy of To Kill A Mockingbird finally snapping him out of it. I've actually read that myself back in High School, and I seem to recall Scout, the little girl, being the main character, and the story being hers, from her point of view. I also liked the scene with Li and his final self realization of cowardice. It'll be interesting to see how that plays out in the few remaining chapters. I merrily await #13. Laters.
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  • From ANON - ayachan on December 16, 2007
    I liked this scene better than the one in PS.. but then again it was a lot more consenual than PS was. Anyway, I don't think you're screwed up for writing this first :P It's a good scene. And dammmmn, is Yue one sneaky son of a gun. Way to go!
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  • From Scorpinac on December 15, 2007
    Not bad, though not really my "cup of tea". Well, I believe next up is the "Junk Lady" scene, can't wait to see who put in that role. I happily await #12! Laters.
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  • From ANON - Ranna on December 14, 2007
    I'm impressed. Man, this was exactly what I was looking for. I wonder how our dear Touya-chan will react when he remembers...
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  • From vix111 on December 13, 2007
    ok, let me guess: someone is going to be molested on the next chapter, and it won't be sakura??? XD
    Im enjoying this a lot more than if I had seen that movie :P
    Yue, I love you! Dammit, I think I'm liking this side of Yue more than just the PS Yue, and that cannot be!!!
    see you on next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Ranna on December 12, 2007
    Ah! Yay, smex! Hurry, hurry, hurry! Please!
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  • From Scorpinac on December 12, 2007
    Hmm, Yue kind of seducing sweet, innocent, naive Sakura-chan, and Touya's finally bitten the peach, ooh, this will be an interesting effect. Can't wait to see who'll be taking the place of the "Junk Lady" afters. I heartily look forward to #11! Laters!
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  • From ANON - ayachan on December 12, 2007
    To Ana-chan: "Besides, you should get everything in writing"- HAHAHA, omg, that's hilarious.
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  • From ANON - ayachan on December 12, 2007
    yessss, I am so ready. Geez, Yue's so sneaky! First the peach and now the sister! I don't really approve of what he said to Sakura, but I'll admit that was a good move on his part :P
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  • From ANON - Ana-chan on December 09, 2007
    Wow, you finished the story since 2004? That's a long time ago. O.O But I'm glad it's done. It just means you'll update faster. >_< I love all your stories. I just hope my mental Luv Luv waves are getting to you. I have psychic powers you see. XD I'm so psychic I can watch ESPN in my head. Haha. But I get the feeling Touya isn't going to make it on time. Or it he does, Yue is going to be an ass to him and still not let him have his sister. Probably find some loophole. "What? Is that what I said? No, no. You totally misunderstood. Besides, you should get everything in writing."
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  • From nmos on December 08, 2007
    this is sooo weird to read after PS. I didn't think you'd be writing after you finished it, so I just checked back out of curiosity. I'm glad I did. this is actually really trippy. hehe. I feel like it's some weird version of alice in wonderland. it's really good. and interesting after reading PS.
    thanks for posting this.
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  • From vix111 on December 08, 2007
    hehe, guardian beast of the archway! I guess he'd be mad at Yue for leaving him in such a boring job XD
    Maybe some kero/yue funny scenes are waiting for us in this story, afterall Yue can't stay mad at him for too long.
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  • From ANON - Ranna on December 07, 2007
    Ah, Kero-chan. What would this be without him? *happy sigh*
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  • From Scorpinac on December 07, 2007
    Actually, I was expecting Meilin to be playing Sir Didymus, but Kero actually works better. So he's stuck in the plush toy form at night, huh? Okay, makes sense. Well, here's looking forward to #10, and hopefully a check in with Sakura to see how she's doing. Laters.
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  • From ANON - ayachan on December 07, 2007
    Ok thanks :) Haha, this is just too cute :) One of the things that I like about this story is the involvement of so many characters!
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