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Reviews for The Labyrinth

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  • From vix111 on December 06, 2007
    I laughed so hard in this chapter! "He could have just asked for my number" awesome!
    and the lucky feather cloak, of course XD
    I'm thinking Touya won't make it in time, though.
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  • From ANON - Ranna on December 05, 2007
    Yue is being so nasty...heh. I love it. I've never really thought that Yue was a pathetic person, but he just gets portrayed that way all the time. "I lost Clow, my new master's a twit, nobody cares about me." You know. I just think that he was way out of familiar territory and feeling really abused, and so was either really nasty or painfully surprized. I love him though.
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  • From Scorpinac on December 05, 2007
    Yep, called it, disguise, thank you! Well, I think I sense a "ballroom" dream sequence followed by an ugly old bag with huge pack o' crap on her back coming up. And possibly another check in with Sakura and Tomoyo, maybe? Nice touch with the reflection giving him away, by the by. Well, I look forward to #9! Laters.
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  • From ANON - ayachan on December 04, 2007
    I'm actually a bit surprised that Yue... err. Yuki, lol, told him all that stuff when they were down there! Well, I'm not really surprised about the laybrinth, but the whole "searching for true love" thing. I just don't see Yue admitting that to anyone. I think PS Yue is better though. Maybe I'm just not getting the feel of this story, but PS Yue was cooler and scarier at the beginning (haha, it's different later when he's fighting to Touya :P), or maybe I'm just not seeing Yue enough in this story to fully develope an opinion of him yet. So what are you doing to this story? I mean, do you go back and do some slight editing/proofreading to this story and then post it, so it stays close to the original, or are you getting some new ideas and so therefore changing bits and chunks of it as you go along? Anyway, loving it so far ^^
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  • From ANON - ayachan on December 04, 2007
    Yay, finally caught up! And good ol' Yukito, lol. Great story! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From vix111 on December 02, 2007
    scorpinac, I swear I thought that he'd fallen off and the other one had catched him in the air, flying :P
    It seems I wasn't really paying attention this time around

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  • From Scorpinac on December 02, 2007
    Yukito doesn't have wings in this story, or at least no wings were mentioned as being on him in chapter 7. Take a closer look, please, Vix111.
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  • From vix111 on December 01, 2007
    well, I guess you really meant that he didnt lose the wings for even one second XD
    Sneaky Yue! He made Touya STARE! LMAO! Yukito with wings is the sexiest thing since Yue and only because he doesn't appear with them as often as Yue. I think that for him to stand both Ruby Moon and Spinel Sun, or he either cares for them (in that same way he cares for Li XD) or he just can't get rid of them, those little pests. It'd be fun if he was sort-of-friends with Ruby and they fight over Touya.
    Yukito and Ruby would totally be best girl-friends, though XD
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  • From ANON - Ranna on December 01, 2007
    Yue probably wouldn't kill Ruby...They've probably got some kind of contract, because I don't see Yue letting someone like that in there without something to make her behave. And while Yue is a meddlesome bastard, I think he'd take a contract with another magical creature seriously. If she had actually done something to Toya though...
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  • From Scorpinac on December 01, 2007
    Hmm, and now the big question - is Yukito a separate being from Yue? Or is Yue being sneaky again? Well, looking forward to #8. Laters.
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  • From vix111 on November 27, 2007
    This last chapter WINS! Spinel and Ruby are far more funny than ol' boring Kero and Yue XD
    I'm just wondering where Yue was that he didn't notice that the monster almost eats his prey! Pun!
    Hopefully there would be a face off, where Yue shows her who owns Touya. Although I wouldnt mind her owning the boy at least once, either XD
    As a good YuexTouya fan I should hate her, but I can't, she is just too cool. The fact that she has breast, though, scares me -_-
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  • From ANON - Ranna on November 27, 2007
    I really like your story. Actually, I like it more than Pleasure Slave, if only because I like the setting better. Please update soon. With smex, if possible.
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  • From Scorpinac on November 27, 2007
    Okay, I was honestly expecting the "Beast" to be Kero, not Ruby and Spinner, but, oh well. Let me guess, their next stop is(drum role please!)....The Bog Of Eternal Stench! Always a delightful sequence, yet without a "Ludo" it will definitely be different. But at least I'll get to see if my guess for Sir Didymus's "stand in" is accurate or not. Laters.
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  • From ANON - Cherry on November 25, 2007
    personally i think that the Yue in the labrynth is more cruel so far, maybe thats because in Pleasure Slave by the end Yue was almost 100% nice....but anyway- GOOD Job!! i like the plot of it and how Tomoyo and Sakura are friends...~.~
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  • From ANON - Ana-chan on November 24, 2007
    We'll find out which Yue is worse when Touya meets up with him again. The one that's the cruelest during smex wins! XD Haha. But I can't wait for an update. You're the only good Yue x Touya author out there. I luuuuves you. ^_~
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