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Reviews for The Labyrinth

By : Capitalist
  • From Scorpinac on November 21, 2007
    Oh, yeah, almost forgot, liked Sakura's new dress and barrette's very pretty. Okay, not a wedding dress, whew... Okay, I'm done now, till chapter 6, then. Laters.(again.)
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  • From Scorpinac on November 21, 2007
    Ah, yes, the peach of forgetfulness, such a fascinating sequence it was, and it'll be interesting to see what you do with it. Fascinating choice of alternate motivation for Li to give it to him, too, getting to keep his sword and being given pretty little Sakura rather than being threatened with the Bog Of Eternal Stench. And just let me guess who the horrible beast in that particular part of the labyrinth is.... I also have an odd idea as to who to expect in the place of Sir Didymus, though I'll wait until you get to that point.

    And as to the "Who's more evil, PS Yue or Labyrinth Yue," well we must consider that the latter is modeled to a degree off of the Goblin King Jareth, so of course he's more evil! Let's not be silly. Laters.
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  • From vix111 on November 20, 2007
    Labyrinth Yue seems to have a wicked sense of humor that PS Yue never showed. I like that XD
    I wonder where Li is going to lose Touya so that he can accept Yue's offer :P
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  • From silvergirlrox on November 18, 2007
    amazing amzing amazing!!it lovely to read from you again!i love this story so far. i like yue giving sakura a necklace. nice touch!!:Pi havent seen the movie so im really excited to read your story!!!and i no this story will be just as good as PS

    silvergirlrox
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  • From Scorpinac on November 17, 2007
    Yes, it's rare to see Syaoran cowtowing to anyone, but Yue is definitely a special case. Though I'm thinking we're gonna hop back over to Sakura for a bit next, yes? Well, I look forward to it. Laters!
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  • From Scorpinac on November 14, 2007
    Well, it's diverged already in that you used those hidden directions in the fountains, the dog "knocker", no two guys doing the "One of always tells the truth and the other always lies" riddle, using that slide puzzle instead, and of course, omitting the "helping hands", as well as the rather interesting introduction of Tomoyo. Why do I get the impression she's making a wedding dress? Oh, yeah, this just gets better and better! Laters.
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  • From ANON - jean on November 13, 2007
    Oh my god I remember this story I read it before! its what got me into loving Touya X Yue. I love it
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  • From ANON - morwen re not logged in on November 12, 2007
    yay! you're putting other stuff up! and i did like ps a lot better than this so far, but i think that's because i liked the originality. i know that it was written second to this, so i can understand why it probably isn't as good nor as original since you wrote this to awaken the dreaded plot bunnies. keep updating it, i can't wait to see the ccs twist on one of my favorite movies! ja ne!
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  • From vix111 on November 09, 2007
    well, Touya isnt as curious as he seemed. He should have at least asked what was on the other end of the road!
    But it would have been boring for him to get to the castle already XD
    Lovely scene with sakura and yue, especially the necklace.
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  • From Scorpinac on November 09, 2007
    You just had to do the worm bit, didn't you? Stupid, stupid, evil worm! Otherwise, neat. So Li's gonna take on Hoggle's role, eh? Okay. Liked the meeting of Sakura and Yue, too, necklace gift was a nice touch. Definitely not Henson's Labyrinth, that's for sure. I await chapter 3. Laters.
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  • From vix111 on November 05, 2007
    I for one have not seen said movie, so I am really looking forward to read this story!
    Thanks for posting this capitalist!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - clarissa on November 05, 2007
    lovin the story u should continue and have the chapters longer and more suspenseful. started out great and has a good storyline.
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  • From ANON - em on November 05, 2007
    i love the concept u have and knew that even though the story beggings the same the dynamics are different please update soon
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  • From ANON - WTW on November 04, 2007
    Its just so very nice to be able to read some other work from you. I totally think that you could just go in to writing and become a novelist. Your writing lvl is that high and I read alot of books in the library and stores.
    Thank you for sharing with us your talent. I do hope that it'll take you far even if now your doing it as a side hobby.
    Keep up the wonderful work! I can't wait to finsh this one. I loved the movie The Labyrinth when I was younger. I'm excited to see what you have instored for this story in all your mighty creativity.
    Thanks again!
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  • From Scorpinac on November 04, 2007
    Luckily for you, I've loved Labyrinth since I was a kid. (Dark Crystal, too, but that's another story entirely.) So far, very good start, and obviously it won't be mindless plagiarism - a. the genders of the seeker and the sought are reversed, b. Sakura is 10 years old rather then 10 months(or so), and c. you're posting it here at AFF rather than at FF, so that alone makes it hugely different from the word go! I eagerly await the next chapter! Laters!

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