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From barrie18 on August 22, 2009
Oh Hespera, I do so love you at the moment. This was just such a perfect mixture of things, and even though I might (and that is very small might) feel a bit sorry for Raoul at the moment, I still feel he got what he deserved in the end by trying to 'trick' Iason. He might be a Blondie, and able to handle Riki (probably only because Riki is letting him anyway. . .our boy isn't stupid) but it takes a Mongrel to handle a Blondie, especially a sex charged one like Iason.

The thing is though, at the moment, it is really just 'sex' with Iason, so sooner or later his emotions have got to come into play. So will he start to feel more for Raoul, or will instinct take over and he start to feel things for Raoul's 'pet'?

I can see however, that Raoul and Riki seem to be reaching an 'understanding' of sorts and that Raoul might not want to give him up that easily, if things continue this way. Would Riki give up Iason and go with Raoul who seems the more moderate of the two is another question.

I do hope the next chapter is Riki and Iason's bedroom romp. It would be interesting to see what would be going on in both their heads. Would Riki be comparting the Blondies, Would this somehow seem familiar to Iason, or create a longing for something he can't quite put his finger on. Will Raoul try to make it clear that in their relationship, Iason bottomed all the time. . .and would Iason actually swallow that line?

As I said before, I absolutely loved went on here and can't wait to see what happens next. . .no pressure, but I do hope you update soon :)
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From ANON - DTE on August 20, 2009
I really like the way you end every chapter, it makes us eager for the next one.
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From ANON - jishe on August 19, 2009
Gracias!!! I mean, thank you!!!! For the fast release, i didn't even feel the time between the last one and this!!! Maybe because i laugh so much!!! And of course, this one wasn't the exception...jijiji, Iason it's son uch funny in this fic, becasuse he is kind of dumb (he doesn't remember a thing and it's kind of silly) and ...he is SOOOO MUCH OF A PERVET!!!! I mean, he always was but now...jijiji, that "dreams" he has...OMG!!!
About Raouls (my pretty and sweet raoul) and Riki...mmmm, i'm starting to suspect....Riki it's starting to "like" him more and more, you know like...discovering his good points, help him to do "stuff" ( >///< he said it's for actually get control over him but...yea, that what the all say at the beginig) and Raoul...he get to the point of taking him to his work, with the excuse of "Not let Iason get him", yeah, right!!!!
Even with that idea in my mind...you know...i don't dislike it so much...i mean...Riki is Riki (sexy ans hell!), raoul is MY raoul (who deserve the best of the best) and Iason like the 3th member...mmm...no so bad....XDXDXDXD (Yes, i'm a pervert and what?!!!)
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From phoenix682 on August 19, 2009
It's a great story idea, sexy. The wording is a little awkward at times and takes you out of the story.
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From barrie18 on August 19, 2009
So far the only surprise I'm having with this story is the 'tone'. From the brief synopsis, I really thought we would be wallowing in angst as Riki has to deal with Iason's memory loss and try and work out a way to get him to remember. But so far, even though this is the case, everyone is just so light hearted about everything (except possible for the Jupiter moment) its more like a boys night out XD

I have to admit, I do like the way that Riki is playing Raoul, but as I pointed out to you in your earlier story, seduction can be a two way street. And from what I can see so far, Raoul for all his bluster, is a gentler Master than Iason ever was. Even though he is taking Riki to work with him supposedly to make sure Iason doesn't steal hi, he plans to keep him occupied rather than just sit at his feet. He is starting to reconize Riki as a person. And Riki will come to appreciate these small kindnesses that were never part of Iason's make up..

As for Iason, I find his whole personality at the moment wrapped for a better word. He is just so 'jolly' that it is frightening. .I realize his memory is wiped but even his attitude toward Raoul, is just so. . . weirdly happy that I really keep looking to find that this is an imperfect clone and the real Iason is locked up somewhere. ..XD

So all things considered, if you keep down this road, I see a 'happy' threesome developing here, unless I am right (and if I am, I'd fall on the floor in shock) and this turns into a foursome of sorts.

Still curious about Jupiters plans and looking forward to the next update XD

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From ANON - DTE on August 18, 2009
I love how you closed it with Iason's fantasy. Update soon please.
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From barrie18 on August 17, 2009
Question time?

What is Jupiter actually up to? Why didn't she have Riki destroyed after mind wipping Iason? Why place him with Raoul? What game is she playing, because this is definitely a game. . .

As to Iason. . . yes he is more layback in private, but his instinct seems to be in tact. . . but at the moment, he 'thinks' he should feel more for Raoul, and sex is a great binding tool for Raoul to achieve this goal. I feel that if he crosses that line completely, then Riki will never get him back.

Riki's point is a valid one. . . he kissed Raoul on the lips because he feels that is what he has done in the past, and he is trying to find his memory. but he has always kissed Riki and has probably kissed him in just that way on his forehead.

Raoul is playing dirty. . . and unless something jars Iason's memory or he starts to feel something towards Raoul's pet more than a sex drive, Raoul will be the winner in this round. I'm sure that to get Iason in his bed, he would even agree to bottom, although he appears to be petrified by that thought. He has to appear like he knows what he is doing and he is a 'virgin'. . .so I guess Riki would have to 'take' him to teach him what to do 'again' XD

As to that last dream of Iason's. . at the moment his hormones are talking, but as he gets more involved with the 'pet' and Raoul (bleh) I would love to see those visions get more convoluted. Dream pet drawing him in, while dream Raoul gets darker and perhaps more gets revealed in the dream state XD

Perhaps next time, more inner workings of Iason's mind? What is really going on in his head?

Thanks for the quick update. . . shall continue to look forward to whenever the next one is.

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From ANON - jishe on August 17, 2009
I don't complain if you want to write and write and write and...MAKE ME HAPPY!!!
XD No kiding.
This chapter...OMG! I laugh so much at the end. Raoul and Riki figthing like teens for Iason..and all Iason could think (or dream) about was: "which hole to drill first" ...jajajajaja....JAJAJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJAJ JAJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJJAJAJJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJAJAJ!!! God...i don't understand how will he sleep well with that kinf of images on his brain..i couldn't...>///< (nasal blood...)...eeemmmm...sorry...
Anyway...I see a dark future for Raoul (my not so cute anymore Raoul). I mean...sex can be a drug...he can get obsesed with it and even if he just want Iason...Riki IS riki, not any stupid and not so sexy pet. My guess? He is going to end just like Iason, and him (Iason) will remember everything and hell will be relished!!! Buajajajjajajajjajajjajajajajjajajjaajajja...cof..cof...sorry. My evil person sometimes takes over my body...-_-'''
See you soon!!! (I hope..i wish...i dream...)

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From ANON - DTE on August 17, 2009
Looks like Raoul is using Riki, but it seems that he might develop feelings for him. Awesome style, I'm fond of how you write the characters. please update soon.
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From ANON - jishe on August 17, 2009
Hi!!!! New chapter!!! Yai!!! Anyway, you say maybe there won't be actualizations very often, but...what the hell!! The only i ask for it's that you keep going with the history. It's amazing so far, and it's just the first two chapters so i'm having big expectations from you...as always.
So...Raould...T-T My pretty and perfect Raoul...isn't perfect and pretty anymore...TT-TT BBBBBUuuuuuuuuaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!
...sniff...sniff...and Riki, oh, my poor riki, with Iason so close but at the same time so far...and my poor Iason (have you notice they are all "my") with his mind erased...If anytime he recover it...he will be sooooOOOOOO piss off....jajajajajajjajaj, that will be nice...
see you soon!!!
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From barrie18 on August 16, 2009
Definitely around for this story. ..and if you can't update as quickly. . .well you did spoil us last time around. .. so be it.

This chapter moves the story along nicely. Although I am confused over Raoul. In the first part of this chapter, he seems to have 'kissing' skills of some sort, and yet later on when he asks Riki to teach him, he is a complete novice. Perhaps besides being taught how to do it, he should also be asking, what Iason likes. . .which would make a conquest even easier but oh so wrong. . .

Iason is a puzzle at the moment. My understanding is that at work he is 'himself' but at home in his personal life, he has no idea who he was or how he acted. He is almost to mild, serene, and obliging, not the man of ice who commands and is full of hidden heat and lust.

His dreams and headaches are a dead give away that somewhere in there the real Iason lurks. But does it lurk near enough to the surface so that he recognizes that whatever he does with Raoul might be a turn on, but is still wrong? Or will he try and convince himself that this is all part of the'so called accident' and push himself to act as he thinks he should act, going against instinct?

Damn, I'm going to drive you crazy again aren't I?

Well, just to conclude... a great chapter, will look forward to when ever you update next XD
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From Mitsuhon on August 16, 2009
Interesting :)
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From barrie18 on August 15, 2009
You really haven't wasted any time in starting a new story :) And it has started off so well. . .

The beginning chapter grabs you in, because there are so many questions to be answered. What is going on? Why was Iason's mind wiped? What is Jupiter up to? What is Raoul up to? What was Riki and Iason's relationship at that point. . . was it beyond pet and master, or is Riki only feeling regret now? And these are just the ones pouring off the top of my head, without going into any deep thought - rofl.

I think, with your imagination running riot, we are both going to enjoy ourselves immensely in this new story of yours.

(any chance of that little epilogue I 'hinted at' to round out the other wonderful tale?)

Till the next chapter :)
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From ANON - jishe on August 15, 2009
Hi there!!! Nice starting! Nice history! Poor characters...XD
No, kiding, poor Riki at least. without Iason, i'll also cry the hole night, but well, aparently Raoul actaully wants them together, or so it seems...better just wait to the next chapter.
See ya!!!
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From ANON - DTE on August 15, 2009
I love this idea. Iason doesn't remember and Riki is under raoul's mercy and who seems to be attracted to him. please update soon, icant wait to see how things go.
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