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From ANON - DTE on September 19, 2009
Raoul has either taken a liking to katze or he has his own hidden agenda. PLease update soon want to see if they really both can hit it off.
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From barrie18 on September 19, 2009
Rofl. . . As Katze put it, who is seducing who? And why do I get the feeling that Raoul isn't as clueless as we think he is ::big grin::

He seems to be pushing all the right button, to unglue our poor Katze, which makes me think that after that original kiss, he went off and did some research of his own. . . Lets face it, things can be hidden away, but if you are searching for something. . . .then there is always a lead somewhere if you are clever enough to go hunting for it. And Raoul strikes me as being very clever indeed.

So are we going to be flies on the wall as Raoul asks permisson of Iason to see his ex Furniture naked? rofl. . . now does he or doesn't he agree? Is the time right, or are we still game playing.

I think Raoul also wants to have fun pushing a few buttons before he and Iason make peace between them. I just hope that he will be honest in his feelings with Katze and not just be using him to teach Iason a lesson. :)

Waiting to see what happens next:)
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From ANON - DTE on September 15, 2009
Poor Katze, dragged unwillingly into the blondie's plot. Great chapter update soon.
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From ANON - jishe on September 14, 2009
Hi!!! New chapter! Yeay!!!!!
Soooo...i really though "something big" was going to happend in that room...thanks a lot it didn't. Don't take me wrong...that trio was hot!!! But...after what happen at the beginig of the fic with Riki belonging to Raoul...i had enough. So now that he only belongs to Iason, i want they to stay like that forever and no one to get in the middle..even the sexy red-head of Katze >///
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From barrie18 on September 14, 2009
ROFL.. . I don't know who to feel sorry for, or even if I need to feel sorry for anyone at the moment. Katze is told to go off and have fun with Raoul.. . Iason is jealous (gee what else is new?) and Riki is a cunning devil, who though he loves Iason, would jump into bed with Katze and Raoul just for the fun of it.

Raoul doesn't have a chance here and depending on where you want to take this, would Raoul ever find out that he had been 'set up'? Because the backlash from that plus all the making up afterwards would be 'fun' for a better word.

Mind you, even if Katze and Raoul came over to Iason's for a coffee. .. Iason would be watching like a hawk to make sure there would be no alone time with Riki.. . and in some sense I couldn't even blame him. . .:)

Keep going. . .can't wait to see Raoul's seduction and the surprise he gets when undressing Katze :)

till the next update
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From Viktoria on September 12, 2009
wow that was soooo amazing and I really love were the story is going! I adore how it makes me change my mind CONSTANTLY on who I want to get together~ everytime I think I know what I want you throw in this other posssibility! superb story and wonderfully written!
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From luvsjazz on September 10, 2009
No, Katze and Daryl weren't together in the book, but neither were Katze and Raoul, so that's not really justification. But that's why it's fanfiction, right?

But actually I got your story confused with another one I read on ff.net that *was* based on Katze and Daryl being in love. I was thinking of that one when I said that they were together, so my sincere apologies.
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From ANON - jishe on September 09, 2009
Ok, that was a hell of a funny chapter!!!! Jajajajaja, i laugh so much!!!
From the kiss, to the "twelve years old fight" and finally...Riki and Iason as cupids!!! JAJAJAJA, THE BEST!!!!
Your netx chapters are going to be something....
Sorry not to write you more, but my head is killing me!!!
Thanks for this chapter!
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From barrie18 on September 08, 2009
Very clever my friend, but now you have bigger problems. . . .You can't let Iason hand Katze over to Raoul as if he were a left over. (in other words, 'here Raoul, have him and shut up. . . )

It was really quite cruel of Iason to make Katze swear off sex for life. . .You can have all your parts, but you don't get to use them, so suffer in silence. How alone he had to be, while keeping his secret. Even other Furniture seem to have a sort of sex life, Katze would never have been able to join in with out revealing the truth anyway, but he could have gone down to one of the brothels of Midas, or found someone to trust his secret to.

Now, he is aware of Raoul and Raoul is certainly aware of him. . . but as I said, you have knew issues to deal with.

Raoul needs to feel that he claimed Katze on his own, not that Iason is giving him permission. Raoul has to stand up to Iason on all levels for them to be friends again. So Iason has to be super clever along with Riki, and set up a situation which allows Raoul and Katze to cross borders, for the secret to be revealed and Raoul confronts Iason to protect Katze.. . . rofl. . .should be simple for you.

I look forward to see where you really are going to head with this. . . hope you don't make us wait to long :)

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From ANON - DTE on September 08, 2009
It looks like Raoul and Katze are going to be set up. Cant wait to see if it works out. Was definitey surprised by the discovery on KAtze, but it would make sense that he would have theknowledge to pull off something like that.
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From ANON - DTE on September 01, 2009
Hehe, Riki really knows how to reel his admireres in. Can't wait to read more.
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From ANON - Luvsjazz on September 01, 2009
I've been enjoying this story very much. I love this anime and it's been quite a while since I have read any fic in this fandom. This one is very good be ause of the complexity of the plot. It seems very well thought out....until this chapter. Yes Iason and Riki are back together and Rauol is alone. And I feel bad for him because it's not entirely his fault that he did what he did (keeping Riki, pursuing Iason). But throwing Katze in there as a possible love interest for him is random and doesn't follow your storyline. Katze is in love with Daryl - not Riki, not Rauol. He was going to go so far as to sneak behind Iason's back to get Darly restored. And he had been making out with Daryl for months, so it's not like Riki was his first kiss in a long time. It would be nice to see everyone happy but sometimes, not everyone wins. Someone here is going to lose, unless it ends up being a three way. But the way you've written Iason as being so jealous and obsessive over Riki, I can't see him being willing to share.

It will be interesting to see where you go with this and to see how you resolve everything. Thanks for sharing.
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From ANON - jishe on August 31, 2009
Hi! I'm glad i made you laugh...and just with true and more true...you are Jupiter, and that's going to be my nickname from now.
I love this chapter: of course, because they're together againg....soooo cute!!! >///< (Of course, there wasn't anything cute in the "encounter" on the floor but...you know what i mean)
I also like the...mmmm..."realistic" way you're handling things...i mean: it was imposible for Iason just to keep his mouth shut and forget the "thing" with Raoul...the most normal behavior anyone could have...and of course, the fact that he doesn't want to speak to him, it's normal to...but sad for my....My poor Raoul!!! All lonely and with broken hearth is his home...without nobody to hug him...to kiss him...to....send him to me!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BUuuuuuuuuaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaajjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
JIjijiji...or maybe....you're already thinking of sending him a cute read head who also need someone to hug him......to kiss him....to....SEND THEM BOTH TO MEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From LadyIkari on August 31, 2009
OMG!! you should put a warning on stories like this. Something like "Do not read in public!! Unless you want to be kick out of a library for screaming at a computer!!!" Totally awesome story! I wanted to hit someone while crying loudly about what you did to Rauol! How could you do that to him?!!? (takes a deep breath) I am okay now. Either way, great story!! Please, please keep it up! You are my break from RL!
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From barrie18 on August 31, 2009
Rofl. . .Damn this is good.

So Riki and Iason are back together, but once again Iason has jealousy issues. I don't think even if Raoul falls into Katze's arms, Iason would willingly become friends again. Everytime he would look at him he would see Riki in his arms.

And you can't have Iason remember, unless it is a nostalgic remember? An "I know I loved you once, but things changed and I moved on." And in truth they did. Iason fell in love with Riki, and what's more important, he 'remembered him' whereas he was satisfied with the situation with Raoul.

As to Raoul. . .poor soul, he really has lost it all at the moment. . . your brief description is really a man falling apart because he has nothing in his life. Well, lets' see if Katze can make a difference :)

Update soon. . . .
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