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By : Quirk

From ANON - KaosD on October 08, 2005
You write an absolutely lovely Gojyo and a believably deep Goku, I'm happy to recall it anew with every following chapter. Ganbatte =)

PS. *laughs**shakes fist* Hakkai, you big lying jerk. "Aw, I'm so fsking helpful I just can't stop and, yes, yes, what is that Sanzo says, too." A rose by any other name, honestly. Sanzo, you too, but that's just you being IC. When will you both grow up and out of it? XP
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From ANON - Coolbunny234 on October 08, 2005
I did indeed like this chapter!

It makes me want to know more about what was going on in the town and such. Are you going to elaborate on that in the next chapter? I hope so, sounds interesting. :D

But anyway, another good chapter. Once more I returned to the fic and saw you had updated. I did a little happy-dance, and then read it. It made my crappy day a happy day. Sank you!

I can't wait till the next chapter, as always. Keep up teh awesome-ful work.
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From Jdee on October 07, 2005
I read all of this in one shot well to end of chapter 5 but I had no choice to stop because I'm shifting house and hadn't packed a thing -.-; but I've saved a copy to my compy cause face I'm gunna keep reading... you got me hooked... *nods* plus Gojyo is soooo my favorite character... Keep it up and I look forward to reading more when I get the chance
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From ANON - Braeca on October 07, 2005
What's this about changing the pairings?! I love the main pairing of this fic! It's so unusual to see Goku paired with anyone but Sanzo, that was most of the attraction in the first place. Of course, past the pairing, there is so much more to this story.
This is truly one of the most realistically portrayed, well composed pieces of fiction I've read. Sanzo/Goku is my OTP in this fandom, but you made me fall so hard for this couple that I wish more people would write it. The Sanzo/Hakkai squiks me a little, because while I like seeing my favourite character paired off with just about anybody, I hate seeing the other half of my OTP with anyone else. In the G Wing fandom, I love any 02 pairing, but try to make me read Heero with anyone but Duo and I'd spit in your face. In this case, I'm jealous on Goku's behalf.
Your Goujo is one of only two I've read that really made me care about him (the other being the beautiful "When I Tell Him"). He's so considerate, and the way his confident, sleazy shell covers his truly thoughtful and self- depreciating nature is something that you've picked up on from the anime and nurtured into something that makes the reader empathise with his character in a way that's seldom found. If this Goujo, who's so considerate in the way that he treats Goku- as if he's something precious- if this Goujo betrays Goku by going off with Hakkai after what they've built together, I'd lose all faith in him.
I love the tenderness between them, and I love the way Goujo sees Goku. And I don't believe that there isn't some degree of love between them. It's obvious that Sanzo wants his little monkey-king all to himself, and I like thta that aspect is in this story; it makes it much more multi-dimentional, and gives it depth, but these two have fallen too far and too deep for them to be torn apart for reason of conventional pairings.
As to your other suggestion, anything more than two people in a pairing is hot as hell for a PWP, but it's my honest opinion that they just don't work relationship-wise. Someone's bound to love one more than another, and to sleep with anyone other than that is being unfaithful. They're better than that, and your fic would lose that wonderful realism if you went in that dircetion.
And before I can shut myself up, I have to congratulate you on the amazing, fantabulous, stupendous, without equal lemon that you wrote last chapter. That was, without a doubt, the most well executed sex scene I have ever had the pleasure to read. Your attention to detail and use of realistic procedures was something I only wish more people would use. In fact, everyone that has ever written a yaoi lemon without the use of lubricant should be made to read this in order to understand the true mechanics of anal sex. And you continued on into the next chapter! Actual pain after first time ANAL sex.
It's nice to see someone with talent AND attention to detail. Hope to see more chapters soon!
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From ANON - Sushi on October 06, 2005
I can't wait to read more of this. I hope you update again, real soon.
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From ANON - Atocha on October 06, 2005
That was kinda weird...I mean Hakkai and Sonzo not a couple...Not cool at all!!! They so need to be one...Not just fuck buddies...
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From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on October 06, 2005
hiya Quirk! holding up, ok? hope, those hurricanes didn't bother you too much. *waves off the apology about the lateness* no problem. i was just saying to myself the other day to lookout for an update from you and look, there it is. ^__^ *pats your head and gives you cupcakes* you're so good.

anyway, lovely work as usual. we actually got quite a bit of dialouge (has no idea if she spelled that right) from the others, sanzo and hakkai, this chappie. so sanzo and hakkai are not a couple. you know that doesn't surprise me one bit. that and the fact hakkai initiated it. sanzo, to me, doesn't seem to be the type to just come out and invite someone into his bed when he's sexually fustrated or stessed. he'd just become more pissy than usual and more prone to use his paper fan and/or gun. and because of that i can understand why the others were kept in the dark. hmmm. i cant wait to here goku's thoughts on this.

but enough about those two, let's chat about gojyo. *shakes head* poor gojyo, just admit it. goku is such a cute and sexy little thing. the way you had fight to control himself around him is proof enough. pretty soon, his touch will be the only one you crave, hopefully. and with being said let me state that i'm very happy with the pairings as they are right now. i admit, when i first started reading this, it was just for the thought of lovely boy smut. *hangs head in shame* but now, i'm totally in love with this plot and would like to see this through till the end. i'm pretty sure you already know that i'm looking foward to the next chappie, so until next time, ja. may the yaoi gods watch over you.

~Devi
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From ANON - CF on October 06, 2005
Been wondering when you'd be post in the next chapter. Good job on it, as always!

As for your other inquiry, I, for one, would prefer that the couples in this story stay the way they are now. It seems like every Saiyuki fan and her sister writes Sanzo/Goku and Gojyo/Hakkai, so finding fics with other pairings in them is a rare treat (Remember folks, variety is the spice of life!). Also, considering how much time you've taken to develop Gojyo and Goku's relationship, I'd be very disappointed if they ended up with anyone but each other. ...And a foursome? Lemme get back to you on that once my brain stops going "O_o".
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From ANON - Shini_tenshi on October 04, 2005
I've been following your story, and I have to say it's AWESOME!!! I can't wait for the next chapter, so I hope it's coming soon^^
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From ANON - Karie Chaos on September 26, 2005
*clings too your leg and whiiiiiiiiines!* More! There is more, right? Right?! *whines and gnaws on her cell phone antenna.* I hope so! This is really REALLY good. I like it, I keep looking back to see if there's another chapeter! XD >.> I don't do that often.
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From ANON - lady_kail on September 24, 2005
Are you gonna add more? Because the last thing you wrote was TBC. I and all your fans really, REALLY want more.
So please, give us all more!!!!
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From ANON - Terry on September 20, 2005
That was a great lemon. I love the fact that they start arguing. You're doing a fantastic job. I wonder how Sanzo and Hakkai will react to the noise?
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From ANON - Coolbunny234 on September 12, 2005
:D
I check back to your story, and BAM two more chapters are up.
*does a very happy dance*
I love you. Have I mentioned that? :D *glomps and molests*

Anyway >.>
Wonderful story once more dearie. I love this plot you have come up with, and will continually check back. *dances some more*
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From ANON - lady_kail on August 29, 2005
Just finished reading your latest chapter. OH MY GOD! You are absolutely amazing!!
By the way, does it end up being a foursome with Hakkai and Sanzo in the mix? I'm
just kinda curious as there seems to be quite a bit of unspoken tension there. But whateever
you do, I'm sure I, and the rest of the readers, will definately enjoy!
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From ANON - krimson on August 24, 2005
I sure wish they would get a Paypal account. I pay everything online or through direct withdrawal, I don't even know what cash looks like anymore.

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