Click Here!

Reviews for Teaching Goku

By : Quirk
  • From ANON - Ren-chan on August 23, 2005
    Your story is so interesting. I never would have thought of this pairing but It's working out well. Your fic is well...um...wery good. (Blush) Oh dear. I really have to push the images of chapter eight out of my head. I have to say that that was one of the BEST yaoi lemons I have ever read. Thank you so much for the entertainment . I think there is a lot I can learn from you . I'm looking forward to the next chapter! ^ . ~
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on August 16, 2005
    *takes a deep breath* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Gojyo finally got some Goku booty! it was beautiful, just beautiful. *bows down before your greatness and sighs happily* man, i cant wait for the next update. oh and yes, it's ok if you call me devi. ^______________^
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Dragyn_Phyre on August 15, 2005
    man...I almost died there thinking that was the end....then I saw the "TBC..."

    *happy thoughts*

    ~Angel
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Atocha on August 15, 2005
    I know what you mean. I just love this paring and I am glad they FINALY had sex. I am so happy right now...I think I will get on Diablo and kill something...
    Report Review

  • From ANON - TenshiKaitou on August 15, 2005
    oh. my. gawd. that was so hawt! way hawt! (nose-bled) darn, I think I'm going to hyperventilate now...^___^;;
    Report Review

  • From ANON - jarm on August 15, 2005
    ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh myyyyyyyyyyyyyy!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - M.T on August 02, 2005
    Awwww... this story makes me all warm and fuzzy inside... ^^
    Report Review

  • From ANON - TenshiKaitou on July 24, 2005
    geh?! that's kinda unexpected, for Goku to top Gyjo na? a little strange to me, but don't worry, I'll still be back for the next chapter. So you know your cue, update! Onegai!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Julie on July 22, 2005
    oh, I forgot to add...
    I completely love the Sanzo/Hakkai pairing in this fic. Wonderful job.
    Julie
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Julie on July 22, 2005
    This is really great! I started reading this about a week ago, at idle times at work, and I've got to say that it's just wonderfully written. I'm addicted! I particularly love the tight interconnection you have between the four of them...the unspoken longing that Gojyo feels for Sanzo-- Hakkai's kiss for Gojyo-- the hentai in me just loves the sexual tension between the four of them that is gracefully and masterfully implied.
    As for the Goku-Gojyo pairing in this... I love it. It's sensuous, realistic and addictive to read about. I printed out the last chapter before I left work because I just had to take it home to finish reading it.
    You've done a wonderful job and I hope to read more. Thank you for posting it.
    Julie
    Report Review

  • From ANON - NyteDancer on July 17, 2005
    Keep going!! Who knows, maybe your muse'll think of an excuse for a four-way...*runs off to staunch nosebleed at the thought of that*
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on July 11, 2005
    Ohayo, Quirk of the Trade-san? how are you? Good, i hope. anyway, i ish back for more of the beautiful-ness that is 'teaching goku'. maa maa, things are getting along pretty nicely here, yesh? we began this last chapter with a healthy dose of smut, a smidgen of angst in da middle and finished it up with some cute bonding. one of the first things i noticed about this chapter is that Gojyo is feeling possesive and liking it. i totally enjoy the fact that now when he looks at goku, the thought of goku belonging to only him is there. another thing i'm loving is how you're showing that no relationship starts off beautifully. there's gonna be some trials and tribulations for the couple to go through that will, eventually, lead to reinforcing their bond with one another and make them wiser with how to handle their partner's needs and wants. oh and before i forget, let me tip my hat at you for mentioning hygiene in preparation for anal-sex. you are one of the few people i've seen do that and i applaud you for it. it just proves to me that you are trying your best to keep this fic as real as possible. and with that , i bid thee farewell. so until next time, ja ne.

    "Hey, look at me when we're fighting." awwwww. i so wish that i could be a fly on their wall ^____^
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Nissie on July 10, 2005
    Waii! I love this fic! Keep up the good work, kay? I really like how you built up their relation up to this point ^^

    sorry for the short review -_-;; It's 1:54 am and I'm tired... But, please keep updating?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Atocha on July 10, 2005
    OK so whens the next chapter!?! I love this parring so much. And its so hard to find. You do a wonderful job of keeping the characters characteristics in check. There isnt alot of OOC. And I like that. Its hard when you introduce sex between these two but you do a good job. And I still want the next chapter up soon. So good luck and hurry up!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Yhitzak on July 08, 2005
    You get a cookie! You get two even. First, your knowledge of anatomy is refreshing (I hate it when authors put the prostate on the outside of the body). Also, you mentioned hygiene in regards to anal sex. That automatically makes you rock. Nice writing, also. You're very technically sound in your writing. I like that. Keep up the good work!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!