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Reviews for Teaching Goku

By : Quirk
  • From ANON - Grace Musica on July 07, 2005
    While I'm not usually a Goku/Gojyo fan, your story is so well-written that I enjoy it immensely. Your dialogue between Goku and Gojyo always makes me laugh, especially when one considers that lovers don't normally speak to one another that way. So, please, hurry with your next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Kiaya on July 07, 2005
    I love this story. This is what made me a GokuxGojyo shipper over GojyoxHakkai. Haha. My friends now think I'm crazy. >
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  • From ANON - Liz on July 02, 2005
    I just have to say that I am loving this fic! :) I'd never really thought of the Gojyo/Goku pairing before, but you are really making it work. I think my favorite parts of this story are how, no matter their deeper relationship, Goku and Gojyo's basic interaction and ways of relation to each other haven't really *changed*, just...evolved, I guess, is the best word. I have no idea what you're planning to do with this, but I would love to see this pairing stay the same--you've got it working so well, it'd be a shame to break it up :) Also, in response to your note at the beginning of the latest part, about making a new arc or something...I really don't think that's necessary. The *type* of lessons are changing, yes, but lessons are still being learned, both by Goku *and* Gojyo. Learning to love and be loved are hard, and they're lessons that they both need...and that I think they could teach each other. Just my opinion, of course :)

    The spelling and grammar in this fic are wonderful as well. If you have a beta, congratulations to him/her/it, and if not, this is then one of the best examples of self-proofreading I've seen :)

    Again, great job, and I hope that you update again *soon*! :)
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  • From ANON - ZoeyJade on June 28, 2005
    Yay I was mentioned! LoL. Seriously though this chapter just added to the already excellent flavor of the rest of the story. I'm sooooo impressed with how well you how each character so true to themselves and still come out with something like this. I bow down and praise you. Seriously. I hope more stories will be forthcoming when you finish this one because I'm already prepared to read them. I seriously adore this pairing to peices and you just make me feel all warm inside when I read your stuff. So keep up the good work and I can't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - coolbunny on June 25, 2005
    *stares* *blinks* *dies of happiness* I love you
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  • From ANON - TenshiKaitou on June 09, 2005
    go on updating, you know i luv you!
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  • From zwei on June 05, 2005
    Gojyo/Goku isn't my favorite pairing (that title belongs to Gojyo/Hakkai), but I like what you've done with the characters here. This story seemed to flow almost as naturally as the manga does. Despite the few grammatical errors, I loved it. ^__^ Great job!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 05, 2005
    Wah! How could you stop there? Oh well, it was a decent stopping point. I just hope the next update isn't so long in coming. O.o Did I just make a pun!? OMG, I did! FORGIVE MEEEEEEE!
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  • From ANON - Jamie on June 03, 2005
    *Grins* Awesome>
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  • From ANON - NyteDancer on June 03, 2005
    cute, cute, cute!!! i like the contemplative and oddly sharp aspect of Goku, and we all know Gojyo's gotta be into more than just women- he's just too much of a flirt! although i usually like the Gojyo x Hakkai pairing, this is one fic who's updates i look forward to!
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  • From ANON - Sayge on June 03, 2005
    OMG!!! That was good!!! Update again and again and again!!!! DONT STOP!!!! This is fricken great!!! OMG I'm blushing sooo bad right now! That was just the cutest chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on June 03, 2005
    hullo hullo!! i'm back for yet another installment of the wonderful-ness that is "Teaching Goku" *steeples fingers* yes. i want you to FEEL the floatiness. Mwahahahaha! *shakes head* ok, the random moment of insanity is over. well, lets see what we have here. we have some heart warming one-on-one conversations, the first lover's spat and, my personal favorite, the first 'making up' make out session. sounds like the ingrediants of a great chapter to me. we had the pleasure of seeing just how insightful (and horny: "It’s just that for a moment, I could see it in my head--- you and Hakkai kissing. It’s hot, you know?" *snickers*) our little goku is. we enjoy every second goku stumps gojyo while conversing with him. anyway, i loved the conversation the two had earlier in the morning and the 'lover's promise' was a lovely way of ending that convo. (too lazy to type the whole word) this is a learning experience for the both of them with gojyo having the hardest time. i think that he'll do just fine after reading this. it's just gonnna take some practice and the right partner. and of course he's already got that, the right partner, i mean. ^__^ well, i gotta go now, so until next time, ja! *grumbles* damn work.....always taking me away from my fun.
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  • From ANON - TaraYuki-Uesugi on June 03, 2005
    My GODS I love this fic!!! It's so great!!! I love how it looks like Gojyo is falling for Goku and I love how their relationship isn't taht much different. I'm glad they still fight and stuff. But I also like Goku's honesty. That's so Goku. Well yeah......like I said I LOVE this fic. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Horny Critic on June 02, 2005
    Hi!^^It is a pleasure to read this fic! Keep going on, please! Even if it is quite fast but I think some jealousy (contious or direct, please) for the next chapter would be nice. And ... the name of the fic - teaching Goku - nakes the saru a center character, right? I mean, anyone of the bunch can teach him something. It shouldn't necessary be Gojyo, right? Well, have fun writing the next part!
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  • From ANON - Terry on June 02, 2005
    Great chapter. Can't wait to read more smut though. I'm glad that Hakkai/Goyjo thing isn't going forward, i'm rooting for Goku all the way!
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