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Reviews for Teaching Goku

By : Quirk
  • From ANON - Shadow on April 16, 2005
    FINISH PLEASE YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - KaosD on April 16, 2005
    Sanzo gave his indulgence? How sweet)) Gojyo /waited/ to be claimed, I'll bet.
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  • From ANON - Sorchafyre on April 16, 2005
    This has jumped another level of writing quality with this chapter. The best thing here, in my opinion, was how IN CHARACTER Sanzo was. The bit about him tossing the lighter in front of Gojyo was so realistic, and you had the sense of him being 'not ruled by anger' while still being as essentially private as he is. Your characterization of Goku is fascinating, he's hard to keep real and yet not young.

    And Gojyo reacted so completely typically! You keep getting better as a writer, and the story itself, while I've not completely agreed with you on everything, is completely consistent and amazingly believable. You're doing a good job showing the progression of emotion, which is something a lot of people miss. That makes this a joy to read and even when I'm not sure things would happen exactly like you present you give enough compelling rationale that I'm willing to buy into it.

    Hope you find time to write more, and I send wishes of strength your way.
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  • From ANON - TenshiKaitou on April 15, 2005
    just update and i'll luv you six ways to sunday! heh. wonderful chappie, no explicit mentioned sex but still wonderful as an emotional ride. fabulous!
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  • From Silverone on April 15, 2005
    The idea of what will happen when they're confronted about this will be interesting to say the least.

    Your characterization is masterful as always. You capture both Gojyo and Goku perfectly. They sound like them and act like they would in the given situation.
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  • From ANON - Paisley on April 14, 2005
    I have been reading for a while, and I've been to lazy to review. :D

    But I loved this chapter. But I pictured Goku putting a sign around Gojyo's neck saying, " Claimed."
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on April 13, 2005
    wow! i wasn't expecting an update so this was a special treat for me!! yes gojyo, our favorite saru just put a claim on you!! *giggles happily* now if only you'll get over your guilt completely and start to focus all of your energy into schooling goku (you have no idea how bad i wanted to put teaching goku here, XP), we can get to see some REAL sparks fly between you two. i cant wait to see how the others react to this little developement. ^__^
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  • From ANON - TenshiKaitou on April 12, 2005
    hmm, the last part was a little of a confusion. but neverthelss, yet an extraordinary good chapter written. luv it!
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  • From ANON - Stephanie on April 08, 2005
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAW THIS IS THE SWEETEST THING EVER! I totally cringe and laugh out loud and gasp and 'ooh' and 'aah' and 'OH MY GOD' when I read this story (and I have readit through more than once because it is amazingly done and the characterisations are excellent!) and I nearly fell off my bed laughing at the things they say and think and do. I rarely blush at Saiyuki slash but well done ones, I do! Like this one! I must look as if I have a fever, all flushed and the like, Please update VERY QUICKLY. This story could go all sorts of places and not seem jarringly turned so don't worry about not having a plan. Lucky for all, you've left things open like that :p
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  • From ANON - animegirl on April 07, 2005
    this is such an amazing story, i LOVE it. i hope you update soon, i can't wait to see some more 'lessions' between those two, i hope that they end up really liking each other and dare i say love? keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Terry on April 04, 2005
    Yay! Updates make my day! Great chapter. I never thought i would like this pairing so much. Thanks for the update. Can't wait to read your work again!
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  • From ANON - Lazuli on April 03, 2005
    Very nice chapter! I like how Gojyo is slowly giving in and realizing (even if he won't admit it to himself) about Goku. And that Goku is admitting things as well. I've been looking foward to this chapter and the emotional developments of the relationship. I think you're doing a good job and should continue on. ^__^ And poor Gojyo--probably doesnt realize how much Sanzo knows. ^^
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on April 03, 2005
    WOOT! AN UPDATE! man, this story jus' gets better and better. beautiful work as always. i love the moments between goyjo and goku. it seems that everytime they have 1 of these lessons, goku chips away at goyjo's heart just a little bit more. i cant wait to see how this will affect their daily life and the others. so until next time, ja. keep up the good work! ^__^
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  • From ANON - Demon45 on April 03, 2005
    I have been waiting for an update to this one!! As both chapters were before this one......EXCELLENT! As I told you before, I normally do not like this pairing, but you are doing such a great job handling it and keeping everyone in character! You have a really good writing style too! I am really enjoying this story and can't wait to see where and how it goes. (You KNOW I really want to see my Goku get with Sanzo!! Dare I hope for such a chance??) Thanks for keeping this going! I will keep checking for the next one!
    Liked your rant and sooo agree with it! I know lots of parent who have no idea what their children are into! I do have to say though, that a lot more are becoming more involved and this is a really good thing!

    "The eyes of Son Goku gave every thought and feeling away, always. It was the main reason why he lost so many card games. Now was no exception as they stared at each other. The innocence was there, but there was confidence to match his words, and sincerity and… trust. Trust that had been there this entire time. The tense feeling that had loosened earlier inside him went totally lax."

    That part was just beautiful! I just wanted to cry!! You really captured such emotion there!! VERY good job, and I hope you keep it up!!

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  • From ANON - KaosD on April 02, 2005
    Believable and careful narration. Simple and smooth - style of writing that suits Gojyo very much. I keep reading. Ganbatte =)
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