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By : Quirk

From ANON - Jamie on December 23, 2005
Lol, this could not have been posted at a better time; I was in such a bad mood, and this fixed me right up.

Great chapter, Quirk! Lol, it's fun calling you that...
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From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on December 17, 2005
Hi there! Sorry it took so long for me to review. I usually do it (heh heh "do it") right after I read a chapter but with the holidays that have past and the ones that are coming up, i've just been to busy to read or watch most of my fav fandoms. *cries* anyway, how was your turkey day? hope you ate well, i know i sure did. ^__^ Well, there's not much for me to say for this chapter except: AWWWWWWW! i was a puddle of goo for days after reading this. especially when gojyo makes pet names for goku *switches to fangirl mode and squeals happily * this chapter was all sweetness for me. umm....what else..... Oh my god! Yaoi-con was so freakin great! I bought so much stuff! they had raffle at the opening ceremonies and i won! It was a smexy picture of the main characters from Haru Wo Daiteita by Youka Nitta. it was autographed and just a beautiful piece of work. Can you imagine how frickin stoked i was?! I made a lot of friends while i was there and definitely plan on going again next year. but i'm rambling again, aren't i? Anyway, beautiful work as usual. Always looking foward to your next update. and in case you don't update any more for this year, have a happy and safe holiday and a happy new year! tootles!
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From ANON - fuzzybunnytoo on December 15, 2005
Well, I just found your story and have read it . took me a while but it is very sweet. You are showning the warm side of goyjo that I knew was therr. I love the G-man. He is my heart throb. The story is just so interesting and i can't wait to find out what happens. I want to find out more about how the other two feel about what is going on. You are great. I would send you lots of pocky if I could. Thanks for the many hours of enjoyment.
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From ANON - anonymous on November 30, 2005
Love your fic. Update soon!
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From ANON - anonymous on November 30, 2005
Love your fic. Update soon!
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From ANON - Jaina on November 26, 2005
Yay! Another chapter of my favorite Saiyuki fanfic :)
Thank you so much for this update :) *tears of joy*
Can't wait for the next chap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jaina xx
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From ANON - Braeca on November 24, 2005
Let me worship you some more! What a gorgeous chapter! And you can never make a truly enjoyable piece of fiction too long; in fact, I am invariably disappointed when something I've become attached to ends, whether it be five pages or 500. I have a feeling I'll be somewhat devastated if/when this story comes to an end. So by all means, keep writing till your fingers cramp; you won't hear any complaints from this direction, or many others I'd suspect.
It really has been such a pleasure to watch the characterisation progress; it's so very comfortable and natural. your insight into these boys is astounding at times. It's not profound statements about what drives a character; you use something much more subtle, like little glimpses into Gojyo's psyche via a seemingly throwaway statement, or you'll give us brief snatches of, say, sanzo's motivation, through Gojyo's moment of insight. And I love that they're actually men, and not overly feminised, as a lot of writers are wont to do.
The relationship between Goku and Gojyo is progressing wonderfully. I absolutely loved the sweetness between them this chapter, and the fact that they know each other's eccentricities at this stage, and how comfortable with each other they've gotten. And the lemons! Without par, as always. The only thing that has been niggling at me is that you stated somewhere along the line that only so much of Gojyo would fit into Goku's -ahem- cavity. With care, and lubrication, a fist and virtually an entire forearm will fit into the anus (although after a certain point, I think we're moving on into colon territory there), so I still can't see how Gojyo, overlarge though he may be, wouldn't be able to fit everything in. But it's a tiny niggling point, and I wouldn't change your lovely lemons for all the tea in China.
The dynamics between all the boys are wonderfully taut and tension-filled though, aren't they? I'm way happier to read this group tension and unfulfilled longing now that I've been reassured our Kappa is staying firmly attached to our darling little Monkey. I was never so much worried over Goku straying, because if there's one thing Goku is, it's loyal.
Anyway, I'm sure you're tired of me gabbing your ear off (just try to shut me up when I'm on a roll), and it's well past one am, so suffice it to say: fabulous chapter, keep it up!
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From ANON - KaosD on November 24, 2005
During the course of this chapter, it suddenly came to my mind that Gojyo's explanation of Sanzo's behaviour is too obvious to be true 6_6 You know, in a good story things that happen are never most obvious or are properly predicted by the central character ^_^ But I, as a rather lazy reader, can only think up the second most obvious explanation (providing Sanzo doesn't lie, which he never does). It is pretty and fits in the story so far, that's why I'll just be silent and watch your awesome muse at work =D
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From ANON - Rayvenfire2005 on November 24, 2005
Yeah! You updated!!! I love the new chapter. Happy Thanksgiving. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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From ANON - Krimson on November 24, 2005
As always, a great chapter. Like my favorite Thai food, hot and sweet with plenty of meat. I do have to say that I am looking forward to Gojyo's turn to be uke. And of course to the contunuing exploration of the enigmatic behavior of Sanzo and Hakkai. Graduation Day certainly seems to look like a change in dance partners. The comment about both Sanzo and Hakkai both being seme was interesting (especially for someone who likes Gojyo on the bottom), As always, looking forward to the next chapter. Happy Thanksgiving!
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From ANON - Dragyn Phyre on November 24, 2005
I was checking everyday for a new update^_^ I feel kinda bad for just leaving you notes saying ''*_* I LOVE it" while others are leaving you all kinds of in depth thoughs and ideas...but I can't help it. my brain goes "Teaching Goku updated! YAY! *goes on vacation with Gojyo+Goku*" -_-;; Good job on this chapter, as usual, and I'm already impatient for more:) You are awesome. Happy Turkey day :D

~Angel
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From ANON - jarm on November 23, 2005
Glad to have you back!!!!!!!! Again a great story!!!!!11
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From SnappedChopstick on November 16, 2005
Hello there. Long time reader, first-time reviewer for this fic, and I must say I feel more than a bit guilty for not reviewing it sooner!

Gojyo/Goku is, in all honesty, my favorite pairing for Saiyuki. I was, once upon a time, all about Sanzo/Goku, but I must confess that Sanzo's constant sour mood really wears on me and doesn't really allow for a lot of creativity and range of emotion in fanfiction. Eventually I stumbled across this fic, back when it was at about chapter 5 or 6 - while I had thought about Gojyo/Goku before, this writing really solidifies it in my mind! They're so damned cute together, and you write them so well. In the un-beta'ed chapters there are the standard amount of typos, but that's forgivable when you consider the quality of the rest of the content.

I can't help but wish a story like this were canon! The inner sweetness you show Gojyo as having really shines through, and you depict Goku's innocence and monkey-like curiousity with razor-edge precision. I confess it: I love this fic. I love all of its sappy moments, the hot sex, the subplots, the writing. Bless you for writing something like this - a guilty pleasure that isn't really all that guilty. You could have gone the quick and dirty one-shot filled with pointless smut, but you chose to write about their feelings.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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From KarieAlkeyiaChaos on November 10, 2005
WHAT?! OO *pout* Bad Sanzo-sama, bad! *laugh* But its good. >.> Still more forthcoming, right? RIGHT?! Right. *nods and looks around for her katana* I'll make sure there's more coming if I have to.... Damnit! WHO HID SOUBA! *hops off to go fight people over her sword* Good work! I'm waiting for the rest!
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From ANON - flow on November 08, 2005
yummy loving keep up the good work
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