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Reviews for Teaching Goku

By : Quirk
  • From ANON - Gingitsune on November 08, 2005
    I love the facxt that Gojyo is determined to stay faithful to Goku despite his attraction to Sanzo and Hakkai. I do think that Gojyo has a self esteem problem and what Sanzo is doing is just making that worse. Plus I do not like to see Goku's innocence shattered. Just wanted to let you know that I really enjoy reading this story!
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  • From ANON - Jdee on October 29, 2005
    Weeeee nice I finally caught up... and I got my net back after three weeks and I see you've updated... you've done so well on this fic, they all seem so IC it's amazing I still have trouble pulling that off... and this unlikely couple is becoming so darn cute! I love it... And the move was fine it's the clean up after the housewarming and the slight killer hangover the day after lol n e ways keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Terry on October 26, 2005
    Wow! Sanzo is such a prick, I where this is going, please update soon, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Atocha on October 23, 2005
    Oh god im confuised...DAMN YOU TWO STOP FUCKING AROUND AND JUST SAY WHO YOU WANT TO BE WITH!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - coolbunny234 on October 22, 2005
    Ahh, it didn't submit my whole post. o.o *kicks the site* Anyway, I was just saying how happy the chapter made me and that I love how you don't take Gojyo out of character for this pairing. Usually, that seems to be what people do. You make me really like the GojyoXGoku coupling. Yee! *glompage* I really liked the whole Sanzo kissing Gojyo to kiss Goku thing. Poor priesty. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - coolbunny234 on October 22, 2005
    Sweet. Once again you've left me happy and wanting more. xD I love you
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  • From ANON - Dragyn Phyre on October 21, 2005
    how about Angynnie? o.O :P I need sleep, lol. been up for 24+ hours, but saw you had updated so bed just had to wait:P

    "(There it goes, that damned marshmallow feeling...)"

    ...love the marshmellow feelings *_* I'm guessing Goku is a lil annoyed/curious about the "pretty baby" comment? This should be interesting. >:)

    ~Angel/Gynnie
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  • From ANON - Maiden of the Blue Moon on October 21, 2005
    Nyah? You like my name/Title? - _ - (sigh)
    I FEEL SO HONORED!!!!!!!!!!! SOMEONE ACTUALLY ACKNOWLEDGES MY EXISTANCE IN AFF.NET!!!!!! (weeps tears of joy) I really enjoy your writing. Lady of ...Trade Quirks, you are a brilliant author. This fic is ingenous. You somehow made this couple work without deviating from their normal character!!! I'm just starting fanfiction writing and I've posted a couple of my fics (The very first one I've ever written and my third one) and I am really learning alot from you and other great aff.net authors. I've been trying to put your story on my recommended reading list but I'm having issues figuring out how (scratches head). ^.^;; (bow) If it's not too much to ask, please check them out and offer me some tips. Bye bye and Keep writing!!
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  • From ANON - lady_kail on October 20, 2005
    This keeps getting better and better!!! I especially liked that kiss of Sanzo's near the end. Plus Gojyo is soooooo sweet!
    And we can't forget, extremely HOT!
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on October 20, 2005
    heyyy. how you doin? lol, dont mind me. i'm just actiin' silly. the fact that i'm attending yaoi-con this year just smacked me accross my forehead. wow, you're really on the ball this month. we got not one but two lovely "this is to help further the plot" chappies. so it's the monkey, huh? *shakes head* again, no offense to you or your plot (the lovely, future smut-filled plot that it is. *hint hint*), i'm not surprised. i mean, what else could it be? now if it was gojyo, sanzo was actually kissin' and not some attempt to taste goku through gojyo, then i'd be shocked. seriously. my WTF face would have shown up in the review like 5 or more times. then i would have had to issue out a death warrant on sanzo for attempting to steal him away from goku. i like seeing the monkey happy and well-fucked. especially when gojyo's doing the fuckin'. ^__^

    anyway, beautiful work as usual. i loved the way gojyo declared to himself that he's not going to cheat on Goku, how it's not going to be him who breaks it off and leaves first and that he's not going to let the monkey down. *huggles gojyo to a point of near death* i am sooo proud of you and these changes that are happening to you and your way of thinking. and when you spared goku from another session of ass-pounding action *rotflmao* my respect for you went way up for that action. (and the ingenius way you guys got off. *evil grin*) now the only thing is, what the hell was goku getting ready to ask gojyo about before he left for the bath? i must been too busy enjoying the smut to catch whatever he meant. *shugs* oh well. i gotta go now but i, of course, will be back. always looking foward to the next update, so until next time, ja.

    ~Devi

    P.S.: Do you like Naruto (the series)? cause i've got some great stories listed in my little green yaoi book of shame that you might wanna check out.
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  • From ANON - SMercury on October 20, 2005
    Very good chapter. This has got to be the best Saiyuki fanfiction i've ever read, and I've read alot. Your story is very captivating and I can't wait until you write the next chapter. Please write soon cause I enjoy this very much.
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  • From ANON - Abby on October 17, 2005
    Hands down this is THE BEST Goku x Gojyo fanfiction I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I mean, the pacing of the story leading up to the lemon scene is immaculate. Goku and Gojyo are in extreme character, hardly any OOCness. And one thing I was really impressed by was the fact that you mentioned what actually has to happen before two males come together. In most fan fictions it’s just stretch it and go, but in your story you actually broke it down and it seemed most realistic and logical to me. And not only that this story is soooo damn sexy!! The scenes are very arousing and hot and your use of description just enhances the experience. I personally favor this pairing with all my heart and I was very happy to see that someone not only took such a great couple and made a story, but also wrote a breathtaking story at that. This is the ONLY pairing of Saiyuki I like and this fan fiction with no doubt will be etched in my mind as one of my favorite fan fictions!! I hope you update soon I’m very anxious and cant wait for some more of your exquisite writing!!
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  • From ANON - Dragyn_Phyre on October 16, 2005
    lol, well, some people call me Gynnie....(draGYN-NIE), so it's up to you. You can call me anything you want as long as you keep writing >.< *pokes chapters*

    ~Angel/Gynnie
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  • From TristarPheonix on October 14, 2005
    You are so awesome. Your fic is so waffy I love it
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  • From ANON - Sorcha on October 09, 2005
    I know I haven't commented in quite a few chapters, but I've been reading all along.

    I've got a bit of an issue with Goku's physical reaction to the sex. Firstly, he takes quite a bit of punishment in cannon, getting beat up and knocked around without much recovery time or serious injury. Even if you want to ignore all that and presuppose he'd have a normal, human reaction, having him be so incapacitated is a bit unrealistic. At least if the gay guys I know are telling the truth. It was almost like he'd had major surgery or something, it just seemed overdone.

    That being said... I love the interactions between the guys. The characterizations are pretty solid, and all the conversations were great to read. I could just picture the outside of the theater, with Gojyo and Hakkai leaning against it. And Sanzo and Gojyo's little fight was *perfect*. One thing I really like is that you show Hakkai's um, ruthlessness I suppose would be one word for it. He's very strong and it's easy to miss that. You don't. And Sanzo 'almost going after' the two when they got loud somehow... fits.

    As to the pairings... it's hard to say. I'm pretty much a die-hard Hakkai/Gojyo fan, but conversely I'm very fond of Gojyo/Sanzo as well. And while I can see Goku having sex with other people, I just can't see him making anyone more important than Sanzo in his life. Honestly, go ahead and toss all of 'em in a big pile and let them sort it out amongst themselves. ::grin::
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