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Reviews for Riki's Submission

By : DrkDreamer
  • From ANON - roriko on January 27, 2006
    YAY! You're awesome and I love you!!! ANK fics are so hard to find, let alone good ones. Please keep updating... ^^
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  • From ANON - ayachan on January 27, 2006
    MAKE UP YOUR MIND IASON!!! lol, either make him submit or not! :P and i know a compromise would be next to impossible
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  • From ANON - ChibiNeko69 on January 26, 2006
    Yet another GREAT chapter!! i love the way you wite, dude...its just great!!! cant wait for an update!!!
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  • From ANON - AnonnaDonna on January 26, 2006
    Boy, it really DOES suck when you get just what you want, only to find out that you don't want it. I'm really glad that you continued the story instead of ending it. I'd like to (albeit belatedly) add myself to the list of folks who do NOT consider this story to be a "failure." Despite all the spanking. ;->
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  • From ANON - Rawben on January 26, 2006
    hmmm... this is gonna end dark isnt it? i'm more of a happy ending kind of girl...but ok... it's your story ;). great chapter! Riki's a doll!
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  • From ANON - Nautica on January 26, 2006
    Oh no, what seed have I planted?
    It wasn't intentional, I swear!
    I apologize if I've made writing harder for you.

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    The meeting with the other-world leaders adds an interesting twist to the whole pet issue. I can't wait to see how you develop the theme.
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  • From ANON - Chicken Ice Cream on January 25, 2006
    O.O...FACKING AWSOME! Gawd, this is such a WELL WRITTEN fic! I've been deprived of good writing for so long, i almost forgot what it looked like! This is such a good story, I feel so inspired after reading it! Please continue it, it TOTALLY rocks!
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  • From ANON - Rawben on January 25, 2006
    niiiice. great chapter! altho i think you're being a lil hard on iason. i like to think of him as an asshole w/ a heart of gold. you know? lol... anyhow, can't wait for the next chapter! you're doing so well!!
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  • From ANON - chayron on January 25, 2006
    Oh, I didn’t want to say that your characters seemed to be out of control. It seems your fic affected me deeply, and I can’t even form normal sentences, hahaha

    No, I found your character highly in character, I meant my own fics. Sorry about that.

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  • From ANON - chayron on January 25, 2006
    At first I wasn’t sure if I wanted to read any of fanfics for Ai no Kusabi, the anime/original story seeming to be too perfect to ‘spoil it with any of the fans fantasy’. But I loved yours.

    And your friend is right – your fic isn’t a failure. Don’t ever think that. Each person sees the original characters different. In all animes there is a big field for interpretation. We all start out with the characters we create in our head after watching the anime or reading a book.

    After the concept of our new fic/story is born, we start writing. But each story has a mind of its own. The characters start twisting and stretching to fit it. I can perfectly understand you, so many times it seemed that they just went out of control, but yes – the WHOLE idea of writing Fanfic is about that – to create a new enjoyable story in the world of the seen anime, the story that would bring pleasure while writing and reading it. You fully achieved that.

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  • From ANON - Nautica on January 23, 2006
    It's interesting to see how they both foreshadowed their own doom, yet are attracted to each other nonetheless...

    It makes me sad to think about the end, and you're not even there yet.

    Great job, as always.
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  • From ANON - Chibineko69 on January 23, 2006
    I love this story...I saw that you mentioned an anime to this? Where can i get it?? It sonds really interesting!!!
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  • From ANON - ayachan on January 22, 2006
    ohhhhhhh.. loooove this chapter!!!!! keep up w/ the good work as always please!!! lol, and hope you like the stories
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  • From ANON - Reckless Mist (sorry I'm not logged) on January 22, 2006
    Oh my goshness! That is awful that noone has left a comment! I LOVE this story! I saw AnK about 2 summeres ago! I love it! I even have some fanfics out for it! You can e-mail if you like, or I'll e-mail you! But I love it!
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  • From ANON - AnonnaDonna on January 22, 2006
    More fic, please. Please, I'd like some more!
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